Just launched the landing page for my new project, toxstopapp!

Hey — saw you launched and asked for feedback. Quick read above the fold.

Your headline: "PROTECT YOUR TEAM'S MENTAL BANDWIDTH." The issue is specificity — that line works equally for a wellness app, a focus tool, an HR platform, or a toxicity filter. Visitors who scan the headline don't know which you are without reading body copy.

What makes ToxStop concrete is the mechanism: you intercept toxic messages before they land. The headline should say so.

Before: "PROTECT YOUR TEAM'S MENTAL BANDWIDTH"
After: "Block toxic workplace messages before they reach your team."

Same promise. Visible mechanism. Now visitors know exactly what they're evaluating.

Second: the entire page runs on feature claims — reduce turnover, eliminate harassment, real-time filtering — with zero credibility markers. No customer count, no outcome stat, no named user or company. For a B2B product asking teams to route communications through your system, that's a trust gap before the first click.

One quantified proof line would do more than any additional feature block. Even a beta metric: "14 teams in beta. 0 harassment incidents during rollout." is the shape of what's needed — use your real number.

Both are above-fold changes. Good luck with the launch.