Kindness Page Feedback - New Project Launch
Hey All,
We've just launched a new project that helps philanthropic orgs and other non-profits create digital kindness corners where they can collect stories and messages of thanks from their communities to share with their frontline workers (docs, nurses, teachers, fire fighters, police, and more).
If you have a chance, take look at our sales pages which users will navigate to based on our email sequence and let me know if the offering and calls to action are clear. If you have feedback on how to strengthen these, please share it.
Page 1: Sales Page - goal is to convert visitors to live demo: http://essentiallykind.11FiftySeven.com
Page 2: Sign Up Page - sent as a follow up after the prospect sees a demo: http://ek.11fiftyseven.com
Note: we've had a few folks say the web pages don't load for them, so I'm also curious to know if anyone else has similar issues (I'm using Ontraport for the first time).
Thanks!
Hi!
Great mission! It's quite clear from your description above, however it's a bit more difficult to catch your value proposition on the page itself - did you test how users perceive your message on the landing? Should be crispy enough to make people keep on the page and convert further
Thanks! We haven't yet tested with users, this is a precursory step before doing that. Thought I'd run it past some fellow Indie Hackers first.
Nice! Some interviews may bring quite significant value :)
Please be carefull to the pricing page, is missing the https
Thanks @paolo_degiglio! We're fixing that now!
Hi! Congratulations for the launch, and for the mission!
Here are some points:
1 Check for the https, I saw that is not set
2 Imho the text is too small compared to the images
3 Try to make more eye-catching your titles and call to actions, because people often tend to read only them
Thanks for this also, we'll make some adjustments!