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Landing page and copy (first version): All feedback is super welcome!

Hey folks, I'm a solo dev building a SaaS to help with a talent recruiting problem.

Recently I released the LP and I'm curious to hear your thoughts - All feedback is super welcome!

https://jobfor.ms

Please help! Thanks

on April 27, 2022
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    Kudos to you for sharing your work to get feedback. I really like the style of the landing: simple, clean and essential. I would love to see case studies or applications of the product in an ad hoc section, so as to explain better and be more incisive. Hit your audience visually more than making them read text: it's much more effective. By the way....great job!

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      Thanks Sara! I'll keep it in mind for the next improvement, for now I'm validating the idea and I have not been able to find recruiters who see it as useful, I'm not sure whether to continue insisting or pivoting.

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    It's simple and clear. I think it needs more space between elements in the hero section. The text seems too cramped together.
    Also, the center aligning the text in the hero section doesn't seem balanced to me.
    If you can adjust these two things it would be perfect. Great work!

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      Thank you. I really appreciate it. (Received 🤓)

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    It looks nice! Maybe at the top, it should say Job Recruiters: Collect Resumes and Free Up Your Inbox. At first, I was looking at it thinking for myself. Then, I thought, I wouldn’t necessarily be collecting resumes myself. Though I have an early stage startup, so maybe I will. 😀

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      Not sure if I understood 🤯 but thanks

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        At the top, it can say:
        Job Recruiters: Collect Resumes and Free Up Your Inbox