Hey, would love for you to check my landing page and the newsletter attached to it. If you can say what is working and what is not bullet point style would be great. Thank you so much
Hey @mugas, I've just checked your site out and these are my 2 cents:
I love the clean layout of the site. It is very easy on the eye and not jumbled up with words and jargon. However, I did not understand what the product is about from the first section of the webpage.
Maybe you can include a one-liner. For example, on my site, I communicated the purpose of my product clearly: Growth Strategies Database.
Cheers and all the best.