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Landing page + Checkout Page

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on November 17, 2020
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    Hey Paul,

    Your site looks really nice.

    The first thing I noticed though was that the way you've written your H2 feels a little bit ambiguous. Maybe something like "For every digital tree you plant, we plant a real tree" would be a little clearer?

    The only other thing that jumps out is that you could do with an indicator/instruction to tell the reader that the map is interactive. Most people will probably assume it's a static image and not try to move around.

    Apart from those couple things, it looks great! Good site, good service.

    Jon

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