Landing page/Copy feedback needed
Hello everyone, I have been working on this for a couple of months now and while testing out the checkouts and so on I had someone buying the standard so I decided to put it out in the wild.
I was just wondering what you think about the landing page overall design and the copy, any feedback is very welcome.
This is the website:
A sleek prototyping kit
for your next Tailwind CSS project.
Oh cool a new product π glad to see youβre onto your next adventure!
I may or may not have some design feedback π
bring it on! π€ͺ
Lols I was about to dive in, but I donβt want to squint my eyes for so long. Itβs also not possible for me to see and critique how they look responsively.
Is it possible to have both the overview you currently have as well as a larger individual view?
As a user, I would also want code samples of a few components.
I like how https://tailwindui.com/components/marketing/sections/heroes does it
The images are pretty big, maybe bigger? In columns of 2 i guess?
Now I have updated the site.
Feel free to download the dems for preview. There's 12!
Did the site change again? I only see a newsletter signup now
Change of plans π€¦π€·
Hi Michael, this looks really cool! It looks like you already have a lot of traction, congrats!
I noticed a few typos and grammatical issues, here are some suggestions on how to fix those:
βA growing collection of profesionally design, 100% responsive layout examples ready to use on your next project.β β‘οΈ βA growing collection of professionally designed, 100% responsive layout examples ready to use for your next project.β
βMake productivty a constant.β β‘οΈ βMake productivity a constant.β
βEvery screen is a components.β β‘οΈ βEvery screen is a componentβ
βThe blocks are created with the less markup and classes as possible, this way your project won't get bloated with nonsense code.β β‘οΈ βThe blocks are created with as little markup and classes as possible, so your project won't get bloated with useless code.β or βThe blocks use markup and classes sparingly, so you don't have to worry about your project getting bloated.β
βThere is no need to configure nothing because is not using different classes than Tailwind CSS itself.β β‘οΈ βThere is no need to configure anything because it uses the same classes as Tailwind CSS.β or "Everything uses Tailwind CSS classes, so no configuration is needed"
βSame developer workflow but simplified to half.β β‘οΈ I wasnβt sure what βhalfβ was referring to? Half the effort? Half the time?: "The same developer workflow with half the effort" or βThe same developer workflow in half the time.β
βDifferent sections withint 10 different categoriesβ β‘οΈ βDifferent sections within 10 different categoriesβ or just "Section categories"
Thank you so much.
I corrected it all, really appreciate it,!
Hey Michael,
Looks good.
I would love to have a 30 sec. video showing me how to get started.
Some of the copy could be a bit more concise.
For an example:
"This kit is the productivity hack you will ever need. Put up a site in hours, not days, not weeks, nor months,.. and I could keep going."
You could even cut it down to:
"Put up a site in hours, not days, not weeks, nor months"
The same goes with the section "Become that productivity..."
Productivity hacker is IMO really buzzwordy.
I would maybe even use the tag line for the header instead.
"The quickest way to create a website"
Have you spent any time building a persona you want to initially target?
Best of luck.
A video... With me talking and teaching how to use it?
I doubt it... π
Agree, the copy is bad, because i am awfull at writing copy.
I will fix it tonight, thank you!
I think you would be surprised how much a video can influence a landing page :)
Looking forward to seeing an updated version.
Cheers
Oh, i am aware. π
But to tell them that they only have to copy paste it fells like an overkill.
I'll do it tonight π