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landing page feedback

Hey
What do you think of the landing page re-design :)
https://hyperlyst.com/

on October 20, 2019
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    Looks good! I think the the goal of any landing page is for someone with no context to be able to explain what you do. So here's my attempt:

    Your product is a website that aims to inspire non-technical folks to build products and side hustles without the barrier of learning how to code. You'll provide ideas and links to resources that will allow them to come up with a concept and make the first step towards a launch.

    A couple things I'd improve on the site are using more than just the rocket ship icon for the various categories. I think visually, I don't quickly see a difference in the categories, so at first glance, it is hard to grasp how much you have to offer. The other thing I think is confusing is you're mixing broad categories (make an on-demand service) with very specific categories (make a doordash clone). I think over time as you add categories, this will get hard to scan through and as someone who's coming to your site to get inspiration, they may not know where to start. Maybe consider an umbrella structure to drill into more specific categories from the higher-level ones?

    If you want more anonymous, unbiased feedback, this weekend I built and launched https://explainmyproduct.com

    You can list the website for free there and get emailed when people give you feedback like I've done above.

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      You are right, I'll fix it. Thanks for the great feedback, I'll try the link u sent to me.

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    Your landing page has that 'startup' look and feel, I like it!

    One thing I find annoying though is that links open in a new tab by default. You should only do that when linking to external websites.

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      sure, i'll fix it

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    This is on mobile (iPhone SE), some observations:

    • lower the height of the menu bar, it’s quite big
    • the hero title and subtitle are basically the same
    • the call to action “free account” is not an action, maybe change to “create free account” or “start for free!”
    • scrolling down everything seems to have a rocket icon
    • there are no headings
    • every item seems to start with “make” I’m not sure what it means, it’s not very descriptive
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      Thanks for great feedback.
      I did change almost all

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    I like the homepage, the social sharing buttons on the left are slightly distracting however!

    • fellow online course creator
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      i'll remove it or make it fewer.
      didn't get ur last point

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    It's really nice, I like it. Although I'd prefer if the options were not laid out as a grid but with a carousel instead.

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      thanks, carousel is good but it is hard to navigate :)
      I'll think about it

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      got it , i agree with you