Landing page feedback
This is an extremely niche app.
It was originally made as a sort of custom CMS for my mom's business selling daylily flowers.
Since most of the work was complete, I thought i'd try to sell it.
This is my first go at a landing/sales page for the service.
DaylilyCatalog.com
Hello, @makon!
The copy texts are quite good, but you could work more on the styling. For guidelines, I would suggest you to check the book "Hello Web Design" by Tracy Osborn (https://hellowebbooks.com/learn-design/).
Also, it looks a little bit annoying to see the same widgets repeated three times or more. If you want to keep something visible no matter how far the visitor scrolls, you can use CSS
position: fixed.Also, as for the flowers, it is essential to have more visual clues, so I would make the images larger.
Thanks for the feedback. I got a copy of the book and will read it in the coming days.
I repeated the email signup form to act as a call to action at the beginning of each "section", but I agree its a little annoying.
Most of the images come from a pretty old database, so the source images are very small to start with and don't look good blown up. I'll look into a different way to display the user added higher quality images.
Thanks again.
Hi @makon,
Nice idea,
Regarding your landing page: you would need to improve styling, try to use this website as a guideline (https://squareup.com). Less text and well selected and formatted images makes your landing page look great.
If you need some one to help you on webdesign, check out: https://www.fiverr.com and search for webdesign or css styling etc.
All the best.
Agreed! I have not put any effort into the styling. I'll check out fiverr, but I will likely keep doing everything myself to keep learning.