Landing Page [FEEDBACK]
Looking to be roasted for my website I'm open for any critics.
site: https://www.somorr.com/2023/
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Everything about your company screams....generic.
It looks like the copy was created by someone who only has a vague idea of what a startup is.
If that is the case, you need to change your copy from "these are the awesome features that we have" to "this is a problem, this product is how we solve it for you".
Our number one goal is a guideline to help startup maker towards success by giving them tips and tricks to find their customers and gain traffic to their website. The other features is also meant to give a push to the entrepreneur to give them few software that can help them build quicker and think less about the technology and more about the idea and the traction it is not meant to be the best but something basic and easy to manipulate especially something that can be learned quickly.
Hi,
Congrats on the launch! I had hard time understanding what exactly the page is all about - a tool or newsletter maybe?
I left some comments here - https://visualdebug.com/show/somorr.com
OK thanks for your feedback I will update them
It's not convincing enough and very monotoned.. although it does get straight to the point kinda, maybe, I dunno :/
You are talking about the video right ?
Yeah that too, you just listed a whole bunch of features without explaining how.. personally when I see a landing page (new business)with a bunch of features I assume you're not an expert at any of those things and the quality of the service will be meh.. especially when there are other alternatives that only offer one of the features that you offer and are experts at it.
Ok thanks for your feedback, I was wondering if you have any tips for the website should I also talk more about the Productivity Features? Thanks