Landing page feedback

I think your site would benefit from using a prebuilt template. I know design is not the most important thing, but a professionally designed site can help increase people's confidence in the product, especially when it is brand new.

I would suggest using a website builder that comes with a few great prebuilt templates to quickly get started.

You can check out two options by fellow IndieHackers. Versoly by @volkandkaya or Dorik by @mizan

That should give you a solid foundation in terms of looking professional.

The copy could use a little work.

This might be just me, but I am not sure who your app is targeted at. Is it for people to rent out their equipment? That is what it sounds like based on the "Bring your photo or video equipment and get paid"

But then your very next statement is "Photoppz video services for student athletes
Transform the way you create memories as a parent of a student athlete" and the copy below that makes me think you are a platform for photographers to find clients.

Correct me if I am wrong but I think you are building a marketplace for photographers. If that is the case, your headlines could use some tweaking.

@kacper recently put out a great list of headline templates for SAAS, but I think it might be a helpful starting point for a marketplace like yours too.

Hope that helps

Having a look, the design is not very aesthetic. It puts me off looking further. I'd highly recommending improving the design somehow.

Also I'm not a fan of the chatbot popping up immediately.

Hope this helps in any way, sorry if it's harsh

I like the idea. Having used professional photographers in the past I think a platform that brings transparency to that industry would be a breath of fresh air. Some problems I've encountered working with photographers in the past:

• Photographers retaining the rights to the RAW files and not releasing them.
• Adding restrictive wording to the contract that prohibits distributing images via print unless the photographer is used to print them.
• Other restrictive wording prohibiting use of images in ways that dont benefit the client.

I think a bit of transparency is needed and a standardised contract that is clear and fair.

My apologies thought I put this in ==> www.joinphotoppz.com

Did you forget to add the link?