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Landing Page Feedback

by Andy

Hello all,

I just redesigned my landing page and wanted to see if the page was clear on what my product does and if anyone would recommend anything to make it better.

I made a privacy and data protection focused alternative to Google Photos with an aspect of social interaction. You can comment and love memories with your loved ones without having to worry about leaking your privacy.

https://www.gokloak.com

Thank you all for the feedback and your help!

Andy's avatarAndy
on February 9, 2022
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    Here we go:

    1. H1 sounds a bit weird to me. "Life's"? 🤔 Maybe "your"? Maybe something like this?

    A Vault for Your Most Treasured Memories

    1. Don't really love the word collaborate in the subtitle, sounds like work.. Maybe something like this?

    The privacy-friendly place to share photos and videos with your family

    1. "Start securing now" <<< this C2A sounds also weird.

    2. "Get your vault started".. Maybe just "Get your vault"?

    3. "Share. Social Aspect".. Social Aspect is the kind of a word you'd use in your ToDo list for this project but I don't want to see it as a user. Tell me about the benefits, not how you categorize this feature.

    4. "Don't sell my personal info" in the footer.. Also weird. I'd get rid of it.

    That's all. Design wise, not much feedback I guess. Looks clean enough. Start here and iterate 👍

    If you're up for roasting me back, here's my landing page: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-my-landing-page-i-will-roast-yours-6b35f5f999

    mzrnsh's avatar mzrnsh
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      Thanks for the feedback. Very helpful! going to change some things now. I will check out your LP and will let you know.

      Andy's avatar Andy
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      5 years ago
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