Landing page feedback and advice

Hi indiehackers, I'm Shiva and I've built a nightlife discovery platform called Nyx (https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.nyx&hl=en) on the side. I have recently also ventured into the B2B space with Nyx for business (http://business.nyx.co.in). Would appreciate constructive criticism and some product ideas/suggestions from the indiehackers community. looking forward to your suggestions and feedback! :)