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Landing Page Feedback Exchange

Hello my fellow Indie Hackers! 💥

The title probably says it all , so I'll keep it short - I want to get the cold hard truth about the quality of our landing page. But I don't want this to be a one way street, so if you would like some feedback on your page too, share it and I'll return the favor!

Let's get the ball rolling! ⚽️

https://www.veriply.io

on April 29, 2022
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    hey @LineSophie catch the ball ⚽️😄

    Appreciate the problem you're trying to solve for small companies. Automating financial advisors' work can be quite a challenge. Speaking from experience working for Payroll in Germany.

    Quick feedback:
    At first glance, loved that you use a minimalistic approach to design and have a reduced color palette. The purple is a great brand color.

    Overall messaging in the first section (hero) IMO tries to be very broad but has the downside of being too generic. I checked your video presentations and you mention help with invocies and financial fraud. Maybe being more precise would help.

    I think your product UI is very good, even if it's just a prototype, make it bigger and remove the decorative elements around it (purple bubbles).

    Minor ones:

    • Remove the "home" link in the navbar. The logo can act as a homepage link.
    • Remove the transparency and strong shadow of the navbar on scroll.
    • Have one "call to action" text. Now you have Join early and Request invite.
    • "Supported by" seems like one of the companies but should be the title of social proof section.

    Also, you might want to bring some personal touch to the landing, to give authenticity by showing the team behind it. Your images, The story etc. Now its seems like a generic web template with no real people behind it.

    Good luck and happy Sunday!

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      Thank you so much for your thoughtful recommendations and feedback! Will get right to it. 👩‍💻

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    Quick Feedback: (Purely from a dev/design perspective)

    1. It's not mobile-responsive, google might rank your site lower.
    2. The Hero section looks great, and makes a good first impression. The video can be better, it's a lil long and slow.
    3. The Contact Us section doesn't sit that well with the rest of the design, it looks a bit dull. You could try my product to generate more leads and manage the leads within the same platform: https://fluxforms.xyz. On that note, leave feedback on our landing page and the product as well. Would love to hear!
    4. Integrations page's URL says "copy-of-pricing". I think you forgot to change it.

    Everything is really well made. Wishing you good luck with your venture.

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      Thank you so much for your feedback - super helpful. I also took a look at your website and I love the aesthetic - playful, consistent & engaging. Some small recommendations from my side:

      • “Artificial intelligence for forms” - center the heading so it aligns with the rest of the headers (left- bound) - otherwise it seems odd that it’s the only one that is right bound (especially on mobile)
      • I would try to make your differentiator stand out more. Up until the last two sections (AI + decision making), it seems super similar to companies like Jotform. However, those last two points made it click for me - how you are different.
      • Blow up your visuals to show what you have to offer! Ties directly to the previous point: show how you are better/ what you are offering that others don’t. On mobile, it’s super small, so I don’t get a real feel for what your product looks like (desktop is better).
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        That's great feedback. Thanks so much :)

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    It looks neat!
    I'd place "supported by" words to the top of the section and have logos in 1 line. Consider positioning your page as a complete product by removing "join early / beta / new tool" stuff, this consistently brought me 10% - 15% higher signup rates.

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      Thank you so much for the advice! Really appreciate it :)