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Landing page feedback

I hate hate hate the super salesy letters, but I figure I do need a little bit of a letter format to explain what I’m building.

The target audience for this page is artists. I’m looking for a few initial users. I am going to do some initial direct outreach to artists I know via instagram, but I am also considering doing some reddit ads in artist groups pointing here:

https://www.artwerks.io/artists/welcome

Any feedback, either on the copy or the page itself, would be very welcome! Thanks in advance!

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    To me it looks more like those messages that say „sorry, but we’re closing down”. The main text lacks contrast, line height is too small, it’s lacking this pre-launch landing page energetic vibe.

    Fortunately there’s a lot of „coming soon” pages to take inspiration from. Maybe you’ll find something here https://blog.wishpond.com/post/115675436858/coming-soon-page

    Good luck with your project!

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    For my humble opinion it's completely without identity, I think so that probably the use of different colors or the use of some specific illustration could really improve the effectiveness of the landing page.

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