Landing Page Feedback - Financial Awareness App

• Why not just title is "stop budgeting", will match the first paragraph more
• How is this service to know what makes me happy? Own what is the $/happiness I get from a transaction?
• Nothing demonstrates there why this would be different to budgeting, you tell me nothing new in this page, you don't tell me what you do besides connect to my account, what's the difference from the 20-50 other accounting software that connect to my account?

Nice catchy headline!
But, I suggest to be more direct rather than being vague. I understand that you want to raise the curiosity of the reader but that might lead to the wrong target customers signing up for the early access.

Here's how I would write it: Your personal finance manager

Hey Colin, despite the "hrmmm, interesting" initial reaction (trust from the nice visuals and typography), I'm left with a big anxiety about privacy implications. So that's one thing.

But before suggesting you address that anxiety, could you tell me more about the situation that precedes a visitor going on a trek to find the kind of solution you're building? What's the throbbing thumb, the recurring annoyance, the "enough-is-enough" take-off point that creates the momentum for something new?

I see some grammar errors, like "Worth It is different.". Did you mean: "With Worth, it's different?"

Hey,

The first line catches the attention! However then it looks like too much text, visitors would be too lazy to read it. Maybe add some visuals to make it a bit easier to digest the content?