Landing page feedback for a Notion built site

• "Conquering Burnout through Community" change to something including programming interviews
• The design isn't great. Does the builder you're using have a different template? (im on a 4k screen)
• Scatter the testimonials
• Add companies you have placed folks in below the header

I would read https://www.julian.com/guide/growth/landing-pages multiple times

Would love your feedback on https://versoly.com/96ab22c6/index and https://versoly.com/96ab22c6/for/developers (not all buttons work).

Hi Daniel👋. Lots of great feedback here already! To answer your questions quickly:

1. It wasn’t clear what you were building based on the headline, but reading the rest of the page made it more clear for me
2. The value add of the community was clear to me
3. Words that come to mind: Support, rebound, guide, focus, on my side
4. I would consider moving around, adding, and removing a few sections (details below)

Here are a few ideas about how to change the page:

• Emphasize success stories: The success stories that you’ve put together are really powerful, I would emphasize those more. One thing that might help would be photos of the community members that you’re highlighting. I think that could add a human element to the page and make that section stand out more on a quick scan.
• Add a member outcomes section: On top of success stories, I think the page could benefit from a member outcomes section with data points re: outcomes. Product Gym’s section is a good source of inspiration for this: https://productgym.io/
• Add a low-commitment way to learn more: I think it’d be helpful to give prospective community members a way to figure out if the community is right for them before committing to the membership or application. Some ideas here could be adding a Calendly link to the website to book a free meeting, adding live chat to the website (bonus: the questions you get through this are a great source of ideas for updates to the page's content), or highlighting the option to join the Discord for free (as @JibrilPS suggested)
• Move “Backed by YCombinator” up: This felt a bit buried on the page. If you put it in the hero section, I think it could encourage visitors who are on the fence to keep reading.
• Remove “Meet the Founder” section: Do you have additional instructors running the program or is it just you? This section made me wonder that. If you have a team of instructors, I think it could be helpful to highlight their background, similar to the “Who You Learn from Matters…” section on https://www.reforge.com/ . If it’s just you, it makes the program seem smaller and would make me question if I’d be getting enough individual attention as a member. In that case, your background is still relevant, but I think it could work better on a separate "About" page for the people who may be interested.

I hope this helped! I’d love to get your feedback on my website as well: https://www.glance.fyi/

Any feedback is welcome, but here are a few things I’m curious about:

1. How would you describe this website to a friend?
2. Would you use something like this? Why or why not?
3. What would you change to make it work better for you?

Overall branding looks clean!

My feedback or at least what I'll do if it's me.

Headline:

• Echoing @volkandkaya on the headline, 'Conquering Burnout through Community' doesn't sell your actual value. Try to craft something that highlights your value. Because the first thing that comes to me when I read this phrase is a mental wellness program.

All your CTA buttons (including the one at the Community Membership & Intensive Plan):

• Not sure if it's the limitation of the notion landing page, but all your CTA buttons are too subtle. Try a contrasting color button that stands out like your 'Apply' button on the top of your page.

The second section of the page (Go further together, etc.):

• The placement of images and the description text are a bit hard to read

Success Stories:

• Arrangements of the success stories card can be improved
• Can consider adding a section before/after these success stories cards that highlight just the companies that your alumni landed with their interviews. E.g. some pages where you see they put 'Featured on Forbes, Entrepreneur, Inc, etc' or those section with 'Our clients include <list of company logos>'.

And your 'Member Resources' and 'Hiring Managers' page doesn't exist.

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I would also try the following to increase leads to convert them through the funnel later on.

1- I noticed that you have a Discord channel and Newsletter Sign Up, so I would create another 'FREE' offer next to the Community Membership and Intensive Plan to make it more obvious. Assuming the Discord channel is free to join.

2- I would also reduce the different CTA on the page so that all the CTA will be focused on leading them to your offer. Meet the Founder and How We Work, I would probably just have the information on the page instead of leading people to other pages.
*This will be more on a landing page approach than a website. So maybe not something that you want.

3- I would move the success stories to the second and third sections. I would care more about the outcome/results or at least what's in it for me before I want to learn about the 'How'.

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You have quite a number of members in your discord already, great job!