Landing page feedback needed
Hello,
I'm doing newsletter for the first time ever. My goal is to share my own learnings as a maker's life.
Here is how my landing page looks like: https://www.getrevue.co/profile/mhetreramesh
How does it look to you? If you are doing it, what will you differently?
The moving image from the 'Previous issues' is very distracting from actually reading the top text
Also I think it's a bad use of emojis, distracting rather than contributing
The text shouldn't focus about you. It should be about the reader... your sugar consumption..
I was in doubt about using those emojis. I'll try make it more reader specific.
Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it!