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Landing Page Feedback please :)

Hi there,

I hope you all are doing well! I'm a fellow indie hacker trying to build a new design business. I would love to get some landing page feedback from you all to see how I can further improve it before I launch it properly.

Thank you so much!!

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Web Development
on April 22, 2023
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    Overall, I really like the design. A couple notes:

    1. The recent projects horizontal scroll is a bit jarring to change to all of a sudden. I would rather not include horizontal scrolling, or add some buttons to scroll left and right instead of using the mouse scroll wheel.
    2. The only design service you need text seems out of place. Everything else is very clean and elegant and that section doesn't really fit. I would just remove it entirely.
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      Thanks @trevorarnold. This is some good advice. I really like the advice and really glad you liked the design. I'll make sure to do the changes. I'll change the horizontal scroll to a slider which will prolly work better.

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    Wow, I've seen your landing page and it looks very nice. Could you tell me what stack you used to create the website?

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      Thanks Mario! I used webflow to build the site. Hope that helps

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    Sounds like Ethereum. I like it

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    Looks good to me but there is always room for improvement, all the best mate :)

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    I think you should consider these things while building landing page.
    Keep it simple and focused: Your landing page should have a clear and simple message that focuses on the main benefits of your product or service. Avoid cluttering the page with too much information or distracting visuals.

    Use attention-grabbing headlines: Your headline should be clear, concise, and attention-grabbing. Use strong language that conveys the benefits of your product or service.

    Make your call-to-action (CTA) clear and prominent: Your CTA should be easy to find and clearly communicate what action you want visitors to take. Use actionable language that creates a sense of urgency.

    Use high-quality visuals: Use high-quality visuals, such as images or videos, that showcase your product or service in action. Make sure they are relevant, engaging, and help to reinforce your message.

    Optimize for mobile: Make sure your landing page is optimized for mobile devices, as more and more people are using smartphones and tablets to browse the web.

    Remember, the goal of your landing page is to convert visitors into customers or leads, so make sure it is clear,concise, and compelling. Best of luck with your new design business!

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      Thanks for taking the effort to type in a prompt on ChatGPT and copying and pasting it here :)

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    Hi,
    It has potential but lacks polish. The first thing is that it breaks on a large viewport. The spacing is off and the prices are overlapping the description. As a potential client, it would put me off a little.

    I am not a fan of icons in the squares with the current colour scheme - they seem like the background colour is off - they do not feel like a coherent design. In terms of overall feeling it lacks details - everything is squared and sharp - ok, I love the minimalistic approach, but in juxtaposition with the colour scheme, it looks like two worlds merged together - typical, user-friendly aesthetics with sharp, brutal minimalism.

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    absolutely gorgeous oh my god. Did you use webflow to build this? I'm a designer too and looking at this landing page made me very happy. Btw I think it'd be best if you add live links to the website examples that you presented, since most clients want to see what the real thing looks like too. Still, excellent job!

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      Hmm the problem is none of the websites are currently live at this moment. But I can definitely add the dribbble link to it

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      Thanks Sunny! Yes I used webflow to build this. Glad you liked it :)

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        You're welcome! by the way, I use webflow too and I think it'd be cool to connect with other people in this field. Do you have a twitter/facebook/insta?

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          Yeah forsure! I do have twitter! You can follow me here: https://twitter.com/mayankk259

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