Landing page feedback requested. Just redid the copy.
http://staging.visualbonus.com/#pricing
Hello! I have sent out some emails to my clients asking for feedback in regards to why the purchased my app and what features they couldn't live without.
Low response, but those who did respond really liked the simplicity of the app. I tried (visualbonus.com) to say that I would increase sales, but without any actual data, case studies or feedback from clients I'm not too confident saying that.
My main win is the simplicity of the app.
#landing-page-feedback
You have 0/100 on https://developers.google.com/speed/pagespeed/insights/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fstaging.visualbonus.com%2F&tab=mobile
I would recommend hosting the landing page on the www. and then host the app on app.visualbonus.com
Some quick tips:
Some quick questions:
What was your number 1 problem building the landing page?
Did you use a theme?
If so was it free or paid?
Would you use a landing page builder?
I like foundation much, much better than bootstrap. I couldn't find foundation themes.
I am not in your target audience so take my opinion with a grain of salt: I really like the design however I don't think the title is explanatory enough for what you do, I would simplify the line below the main title (that explains what you do) and put it on top since it's the first thing that catches my attention when I visit the site.
Thank you, making adjustments
The first line that we read isn't very helpful in understanding what your business is about. I would recommend you to look into that. The content below that is explained well. Also, the pages go off and the content is not visible when I shrink the screen size which points to some issue with responsiveness.
All the best