Landing Page Feedback: review mine and I'll review yours!
Offering a reciprocal review of your landing page for reviewing mine. Offer valid until exhaustion sets in. Here is an example review that I just made.
We just launched our new landing page/website two weeks ago and would appreciate any feedback: Swoopnow.com
The intentions behind the design:
An adventurous design that is informed by industry leaders that quickly informs our target audience that we are a unique solution that is innovative and secure.
Auth is hard, we make it fun and easy.
This solution uses custom illustration and treats the page as a new world where passwords never existed.
I wouldn't say auth is ever fun. :) But, I think you've hit all your marks. The site looks professional. Love the demo gif! It's very clear and compelling. Well done!
ALl the best!
I appreciate the feedback.
Our team laughed about your auth comment when I shared it at our retro!
Design is awesome - good job on that. I would say the one thing I would consider changing:
"Securely authenticate your users with a single click, add MFA, and wrap it up in your brand. Swoop makes going password-free easy for everyone."
It seems like you are potentially speaking to different audiences. Who's your target buyer? Based on that, I think you could customize it a bit more specifically to that person.
GREAT FEEDBACK.
I appreciate you looking deeper than the design and responding to our value prop. I shared it with our marketing team for consideration.