Landing Page Feedback – Time management app for non-work life
This is V2 of my landing page built with Framer:
I created a very quick V1 landing page with mocker.app last month and got some great feedback (mostly that no one understands what it does 😅 still helpful!). I incorporated a lot of that feedback into V2 and now I'm ready for the next round!
Do you understand what the app does?
Do you think it would add any value over existing apps?
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Love the simplicity of the landing.
A couple of suggestions:
Be more specific about what your app does. Harness your free time can be applied to anything → Including Netflix. I know you want to be inspirational but you'll have time to do that :)
CTA. Remove the iOS vs Android selector. This adds friction in the flow.
Your graphics are cool. But make sure once you have a solid build add real screenshots. Start collecting feedback Asap from alpha users and ask for testimonials in the hero section to give social proof.
I also launched a native app and went through a similar process for a landing page design. Wrote a practical case study for others, imo it's super relevant for you too.
Thanks, Oleg! This feedback is very helpful.
This has been a big struggle for me. “Harness your free time” was my attempt at clarifying what the app is not (another productivity tool for your work day), but I can see that it’s still too generic. I’ll keep experimenting with it!
This is interesting. Given that the selector defaults to the most popular choice, I’m not convinced (yet) that the friction outweighs the information I gain from it. I’d like to know if any folks are interested in Android 1) so I know if/when to prioritize and 2) not to send them the iOS beta when it’s ready first.
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IMHO the best landing design or what in my case works better is to have in the first windows "Claim, description, call to action" (what in your case is what you have) but as well a img of the app, or if is not possible because you're developing it, use a illustration.
I see as well that description is poor and not concise. I'd describe it better.
I like the minimal design and clean :)
Good luck launching the app
Thanks!
Which part specifically? Or do you mean the whole thing? It’d be helpful to know so I can iterate.
Yep, not enough development done to show real screenshots yet. I went with multiple illustrations below the hero section because there isn’t one single screen that captures the whole value prop of the app. But maybe it’s still worth putting something up there regardless. Thanks!