Landing Page For A Marketing Service (v1.1)

I would change the pictures and the CTA buttons. It looks like you are pushing your service to the customers. I see that AI builds this, which you use for pictures and the script as well. "Get Customers Now" is a little heavy-handed as letsbecomehuman mentioned. Make it like "Bring more customers to your doorstep", "I help businesses to get more customers" or something like that.

The website and concept is great but the initial pitch and text on the first card can use some work. I think "Get Customers Now" is a little heavy handed - I would try to go with something a little more subtle, ie make readers feel like they'll get more customers instead of telling them explicitly.

Just imo of course!