Landing page for a videogame being created to help stray cats
Hello there,
I'd like to ask for your opinion, remarks and/or suggestions to this landing page.
It's a project I started primarily to raise money to help stray cats and secondarily to get besides technical experience also better marketing and PR skills (in short, learning by doing).
Thank you in advance!
Wow Marian, what a beautiful game and for a good cause!
My thoughts on the page:
Buy the game to save a cat. Launching Soon!
My Nine Lives is a survival game with an endless procedurally generated world. When you buy a copy you'll help stray cats and 100% of revenue will be donated! Tell me more >
[email address]
I'll never share your email with anyone else.
[Keep me posted]
...or something like that? Also, maybe integrate the game twitter link near there? Seems disconnected under the video.
You bold transparent account, but I am not sure what that means. Maybe a link or slightly more explanation?
Maybe add your name or signature again at the bottom of your "letter" above your picture, I really like how transparent you are that you are behind the site.
Hope that helps! Good luck!
Hi Amanda, thank you so much for your feedback.
Edit: I've made changes you've suggested and it really looks much better, especially the video player.
There is a button [I'd like to check your transparent account] with a link to an account overview where income and outcome payments can be seen, though it's commented out for now.
I've been in a bank a couple of days ago to open that account and make it transparent takes up to a week, they said... you know banks :-).