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Landing page for my upcoming product

https://www.aicarousels.com/

I made a landing page for my new product that will be launched in a few days. Any thoughts or feedback on it? 🤔

Thanks!

submitted this linkon May 11, 2023
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    Easy test: shorten your hero to one outcome line + one qualifier line (who it is for). Clarity beats completeness on first visit traffic.

    If useful, I can mock this directly against your existing copy so it’s fast to ship.

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    I think part of your website copy needs to be mentioned why your carousels are important in the first place.

    For me, I just see that Carousels are just a tool to use imagery to communicate why they are important.

    Adding to that, you can frame your copy around saving copy.

    I also feel that you can say things in less words.

    I can help you with copy by writing a free landing page copy if you are looking to add a landing page video to your landing page.

    If you are interested in a free landing page video script, feel free to email me at growthmarketgigs@gmail.com.

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      I completely agree that I haven't done a good job explaining the value of the carousels. Your feedback is really helpful. Thank you!

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        I do what I can.

        Let me know of you need more help, by the way.

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    First impression - give it more breath. Everything is so cramped. The overall feel is that there is a lot of text content because there are nine cards packed up together - it looks very homogenous and needs a little more differentiation.

    The next question is - do I need 4 full-size examples that jump into my face right away? Probably not - I will understand the idea with only 1-2 smaller examples. To better visualize what I mean: very simple but clean website: https://www.withchanneled.com
    The amount of information is almost similar but the content is distributed very differently. Second example: https://www.capchase.com - very simple structure but there is more in terms of variability and architecture information.

    To summarize - this is not a bad website, but it can be better. Is it sufficient for a start? Yes, it works.

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      Thanks for the feedback and references! I'll definitely consider your suggestions. If people like the product, I'll work on making the website look better than "good enough"

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        No problem. I am a creative director so I do care about the design a way more than the average consumer. I know that the product is the focus but building a brand also will help in the future. At least the website is quite easy to change this day without much investment. Good luck with the product!

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    Congrats on the launch! I left some feedback for you to consider here - https://visualdebug.com/show/aicarousels.com

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      It was awesome that you took the effort of using this tool. Super valid feedback as well. I really appreciate it!

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    Heyo Fernando!!

    The middle of the section looks interesting. But as pointed out by Matteo, the top fold looks weak. How about you try to showcase the carousels in action, like on Instagram or LinkedIn? This way, people would be able to imagine what the carousels will look like when posted.

    Also, in the features section, pick three of them which you think are your USPs and highlight them in the top fold.

    As you have a short-form landing page, it is crucial that your top fold acts as the hero (section) it is. Keep it minimalistic and impactful.

    I do like the color palette.

    All the best.

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      Thanks a bunch. Really great feedback from everyone. Thanks 💯

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    I recently launched a new feature on Bolty for providing landing page feedback. It also has a new feature to "roast" your landing page (meant as more of a joke, but it has some good stuff in there too 😂).

    Hope it's helpful!
    https://app.bolty.ai/

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    My 2 cents: I would prefer a bit less text in the "above-the-fold" section, and maybe add 2 lines or so to expand the concept before the carousel samples.
    Question on one of the features: why do you have watermarks on the pictures if removing them will be free?

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      Thanks, Matteo! To download without watermark, users can simply share a link on social media. Hopefully, it’ll help get more people using the tool!🤞

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    1. Once you have effectively captured the interest of your users through the hero section, utilize the body section to demonstrate the functionality of your product, highlight how it addresses their challenges, and emphasize why it is a superior option compared to their current solution.

    2. Product features that are explained with the help of screenshots or GIFs of the app UI have greater influence on conversions.

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    Congratulations on the launch of your product!

    I love this landing page. The pacing feels like its on-point as I scan down the page. The CTA button is really great how you can jump right in to the product and see what's going on.

    I think you could rework the animated carousels section to provide more direct context on what your app is creating. I've worked up a critique that covers both desktop and mobile breakpoints. I've also created a mockup for you on an alternate carousel showcase you may want to consider.

    You can view it here: https://www.figma.com/file/xherRVLcskPYAMmcATNQ1j/aicarousels.com?type=whiteboard&node-id=0%3A1&t=6fpwjBDjo95iCWMT-1

    This was a tough crit. The landing page is really well designed. Thanks for letting me provide feedback for you.

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      Bran, thanks for the critique! You make good points and clearly know your stuff.

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      Great feedback, thanks a lot for taking the time to write such thoughtful comment. I'll see if I can fix some of the issues before launching on Monday.