Greetings Indiehackers,
Recently got our extension published in chrome webstore + firefox addons and modified our landing page.
ScreenplaySubs - an extension to watch Netflix movies with screenplays side-by-side, in sync
Landing
Demos
Firefox Extension
Chrome Extension (Also works with Edge and Brave)
I would like to ask the Indiehackers community for feedback on Landing or browser extension
EDIT:
credits to @neea, @rfizzy, @Filmpatico for initial feedback
I would alter the H2 to not repeat the same thing as the H1, but instead try to explain: What Is THE ADVANTAGE of reading the script?
For example you could say:
Other than that, GOOD JOB!
I specifically like the
Thanks, I got the inspiration from Overcast's landing page, and thought it was very effective to humanize the visitor's perception of the people behind the curtains.
Definitely agree that H2 is too similar with H1, and I like your suggestion. Previously, I wanted to make sure the visitor is aware of the app's core functionality right from the H2. I do get it though, it doesn't show what the visitor will get out of it (why would anyone care to view scripts in real-time?). I guess it's better to act as a hook to get users interested enough to scroll down and get more concrete details.
yeah you're hook is the combination of H1 and H2, H1 is to WOW and H2 is to support the WOW with effective copy.
Imagine if your H1 was something like
then you can explain in the rest of the page, why its important to regenerate cells (eternal life? bye bye sickness? etc) and how no one else does it in the world and you're THE ONE.