Landing Page is live! 🥳
Hello!
So as I'm building out my app: https://www.indiehackers.com/product/chnge I have finally released portion of the landing page (or user interest page) the link can be found here: https://chnge.app/
What I would find super helpful if others can have a look at the design, check if it looks clean and easy to read and any advice on copywriting will be helpful too! (I tried to make it as basic as I could while setting up infra in order to prepare if needed)
Note:
I plan to update the page of the app after I go through some advice changes and then also update the page to add more content (this is the first of many changes before the development continues as I want to verify interest other than my small circle)
Thats all for now my end. Keep Hacking
Cheers!
Hey ToreanJoel!
I'm fairly new to design so consider me a grandma test.
What I like:
• The right-side bar (or lower section if you look on the phone) with the 3 info boxes (i.e. “Good Morning!, Check in time, etc.) Looks pretty cool, I don’t see that look in a lot of webpages, so it stands out to me.
• Header and feature text looks good and renders well.
What needs some improvement:
• Content in the info boxes is confusing, there isn’t a lot context for what they are describing
• A lot of the content is cut off or doesn’t align correctly
o Top of Logo cut off on my laptop view
o Second half of Privacy text is cut off on my laptop view
Cool look overall but some of the content is confusing and not everything renders correctly (based on what device you view on).
Keep up the good work!
Exactly what I need. Thank you! Noting this down and getting this sorted out ASAP, thank you so much for taking the time to have a look as well, apreciated!
Okay, looked at your landing page.
And got totally confused.
Is it about habits? Nutrition? Bitcoins? Finances?
So I'd talk about the design too but I believe the message is much more important what now looks a bit messy to me.
Cheers.
So yes, it would be around financial habits and having assistance for the positive continually over time using what you added. I have gotten another question around copy, and this being mentioned again is good as it highlights the need to be more specific on what. I am bumping up the priority of this and then going to look at the copy to make it point it out a lot more.
With regards to messy, feel free to shoot anything you feel seems off to you, I am an open book and looking for any thoughts or ideas.
Thank you for taking the time to look at this, appreciate it!
I had a quick look at your site. I like the design you are using, although I struggle to understand the problem you are solving. Perhaps it is clear and I can't understand it, but I would like to see references to an expense tracker, connection with bank accounts, etc.
I went through your product profile on IH, and I like the idea. I wonder if a "habits copying" option could work, smoothing similar to what eToro has with social trading, but for good saving habits.
Thank you for this, it's very useful as I was not able to get the phrasing as well as I would like. I noted this down and will most definitely tweak it. The idea is to be able to express this in a concise way. Going to look at eToro and their social trading.
With regards to the connection with bank accounts, I was juggling the idea of making one need to connect to accounts and rather make it like a journal that implements a cross over as I plan to use moods or feeling on transactions along with being aware of what you are adding, making one aware of what was done through the day. I have integrations planned that will be a middle ground I am working towards first while trying to get the idea of connecting accounts which can connect external services or have the platform push data to services.
I am going to have a look at the rewording though and the idea of "habits copying" was something I did play around with. I plan some gamifications where you can share habits you do with others which doesnt share values but gives a way for others to have a somewhat better trained AI based on what it did for a certain range for someone else (some overview of what was done but still working through, good to see there is some thoughts on this as well)
Awesome. Sounds good
Looking nice! I might suggest adding a footer to the bottom of the page, even if it only has the business name and year. On mobile particularly it kinda looks like the page is getting cut off but its really just because the image abruptly ends. Best of luck brotha!
Will definitely get this added. I was thinking if it was too plain or seemed blank is (even if there was colour) - I then struggled with what to add but I think adding a basics for now and later adding links to other parts as I flesh out pages or socials or places for communities to join so having one will serve purpose functionally as well. Thank you!