Landing page messaging changed based on feedback - What do you think?

.. The main headline is great ("Add Integrations to Your SaaS, Quickly."). Only better might be something quantifiable, like "Add 50 most common integrations to your SaaS product in 5 minutes".

.. The sub head is unnecessarily complicated grammatical monster ("Pathfix is an OAuth 2.0 proxy service that gives you the flexibility to offer integration to your customers so they can connect to their apps. ").

.. I already got what the product does from the clean main headline, so the sub head didn't offer any information, and being such a complicated sentence just nudged my happiness-indicator downwards.

.. Then the first feature description (under "an integration proxy" title) kind of repeats the same thing for the third time... And then rest of the page repeats it two more times, in more detail and slightly different wording. Maybe consider consolidating these repeats to a single larger section with a diagram showing the different actors and message flow?

.. But lot of critical concerns are not addressed: do you have the expertise of hosting the stuff or are my integrations going to be unreliable, what about security?

.. Besides of the messaging, the font was small low contrast grey with condensed letter spacing. A combination that made main copy texts too tiring to read.

Hope this helps & best of luck!