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Landing Page Review

Hi guys. I've created a new landing page for my startup. Tried to follow problem-solution structure. I would really appreciate your opinion about it. Any improvement suggestions are welcome!

Here is a link to LP itself: https://contentwise.pro/intro

on June 8, 2022
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    It would be nice if your website described more about what the product does. Also, the fixed image as you scroll is a little confusing, which makes it difficult to read the words behind it. Great clean layout though!

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    Hi Alex, I took a look at the landing page and wrote a review. Hope some of this feedback is helpful!

    Cotentwise Feedback

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      Thanks to your reply the landing page has been updated to: https://contentwise.pro/ :)

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      Thanks for taking the time and doing this valuable review!

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    I'm not real sure what your service does. I'm not sure if it just analyzes pages or if you also create content for subscribers.

    It was frustrating not having a navigation bar at the top of the page. I felt like I had to sit through a presentation that I didn't want to sit through. Usually if the initial page content doesn't answer what I'm looking for, I immediately look at the navigation bar options to find a page (like pricing or about) to figure out the information I'm looking for.

    Not having those navigation elements at the top of the page was really frustrating. I would recommend adding the same navigation items you have on your other pages ( https://contentwise.pro/pricing ).

    From the presentation, it seems like the service is a page analyzer. I'm not real clear how this is different from other page analyzers on the market (I've done a lot of WordPress development work in the past so this seems similar to the various SEO plugins for WordPress that analyze pages).

    It might help to compare your service against other services that users are already using. I'm not a marketing expert, but I would recommend focusing on emotions and feelings rather than problems and solutions.

    The pricing page also isn't real clear. I don't know what "Words Per Document: 5000" means. I'm sure that means something from the site's end, but that is a completely unknown metric to me. Does the service analyze 5,000 words per document, does it create 5,000 words per document, etc.? Since I don't understand the service, I figured the pricing page might help, but the pricing page doesn't help explain what the service does either.

    It might help to create a short video explaining the benefits of the service by walking through an example and why I would want it. Maybe include some testimonials (if you don't have any customers yet, explain how it has benefited your own work).

    I would also point out that "Take your SEO process from hours to minutes." seems like a bold, impossible claim. I'm assuming even if I were to use your service, I'm still going to need to manage content and research other things. It may free up other time I have spent, but I'm assuming it's not going to allow me to push a button and everything just automatically works. That tagline doesn't grab me emotionally, it just makes me skeptical of the service.

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    After typing all this up, I was taking one last look at your message and realized you had linked to the /intro page instead of the home page. I think you home page does a better job of presenting the service versus this intro page. I would also recommend explaining why I would want to use your service compared to other services on the market (especially since it sounds like I have to copy and paste into your service where other solutions analyze the pages themselves).

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      Thanks to your reply the landing page has been updated to: https://contentwise.pro/ :)

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      Thanks for taking the time and doing this valuable review!