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Landing page review

Hi, I'm starting my project and I would be grateful if some of you could throw some critics at my landing page: http://beta.heemo.co

The project is meant for France, I translated the website only for you guys so there may be some typos :')

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    Congrats on getting your landing page up!

    I am the co-founder at draftss.com and would love to help give a few pointers on the overall design & UI/UX.

    To start with, I think the following changes would help to make the landing page better:

    • Logo would look better if it is center aligned and maybe you can remove the background strip from the logo
    • 'It's coming' text should also be center aligned
    • The distance between the text input and send button should be reduced
    • Changing the colour of the send button to something else that goes with the contrast of the background would make it more visible
    • Change the text of the send button to 'Register' or 'Sign up' or 'Early Access'
    • The features (Quality, Efficiency, Community) should have a title to it describing it in a few words
    • 'More info' link should be center aligned
    • The description of features must come in the same order as above (i.e. Quality, Efficiency, Community), not Efficiency, Quality, Community
    • Increase the size of the title where you are describing each feature in detail
    • Changing the colour of the title would definitely make it more interesting
    • The colour of the sub-features (Advanced search, Documents Hosting, Customised Notifications) can be changed based on the icon's colour below making it easily identifiable in the first look. Maybe try #2ac084
    • The footer is pretty empty currently. You need to add some contact details, or email or a contact form
    • There should also be a Register option below either by adding another text input or redirecting the user to the top

    If you ever revise the changes and are looking for more detailed feedback you can reach me at jd@draftss.com

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      Can you provide feedback for my website too? I've sent you an email.

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        Sure. I'd be happy to.

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      Thanks a lot for the detailed feedback! I'll keep your contact in mind :)

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    I think you need to add some more images or photos.. looks very empty
    There is too much space between all the page elements, everything can be condensed and use a lot less space, or, you can fill these spaces with some more text/images/illustrations etc.

    Regarding the content, maybe in this case could work better to identify at the beginning if your user is a landlord or a tenant and show only the relevant content/features?

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      Good idea! I'll add some kind of tabs to customize the content.

      Regarding the content itself, it's difficult to add pictures as nothing has been done yet. You meant for the "Quality" and "Community" parts?

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        Doesn't need to be a picture of your product, but some illustrations, or photos that support the content of your text

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    I love the design! My 2 cents:

    • Change the color of the send button, it's hidden by the background
    • Add more images in the "Quality/Community" part (before the footer. It looks empty

    Otherwise well done :D

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    Design-wise — just do yourself a favor and grab a well-designed template. There's too many elements that don't look good for you to waste time fixing them individually (layout, colors, fonts, etc.)

    Beyond that, it's not very clear what the product is or why people would want it. You're describing features, but not benefits.

    Take a step back and figure out why people would want to use it, and then talk about that. I can take a look at the French version if you want more help with the copy.

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    You should get a better logo, different font, better icons and content in the footer.

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    Cying out for an inspirational picture of happy people just successfully matched up.

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      I'll see what I can design :)

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    @Monstercrunch why not sign up and i will give you a free user test - https://useraffinity.carrd.co/