🔥 Landing Page Roast (iOS App) 🔥
Please roast my landing page! Seasons is a B2C journaling / note taking iOS app.
Feedback on everything from product positioning, copy, to visuals is welcome. Trying to find a cohesive voice leading up to a Product Hunt launch.
Thanks!
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Not a particularly big fan of the tie-dye or the serif font thing but if that's the brand identity you've built...
The hero should be centered on mobile.
I don't love the color palette. It's quite pale and washed out. Especially under "More Amazing Features". I can hardly even make out some of the colors from the white background on my retina screen.
Also maybe it's just me but some of the images look a little blurry as if they've been saved in poor quality.
The app store button should open in a new tab.