Landing Page Feedback September 25, 2020

🔥 Landing page roast 🔥 will fire yours back 🚒

Slava Ganzin @slavaGanzin

https://whatnot.ai

  1. Did you get idea/value prop?

  2. Is article-like landing page ok? Or you think it should be conventional one?

p.s. post your landing pages and i will provide feedback

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    hi slava,

    1. i think i get it, but it took me a bit
    2. i like the page idea, but execution must improve imo

    here are my notes:

    • looks like a meme site with the trump/times pic
    • all my interests in one place: dubious! how is that possible and how could it be desirable? i like my interests in their own contexts dont i? is there a specific use case you can zero in on?
    • seems like this is about news. i didn't get that from the headline
    • the writing is very fun! keep it up! but please help me understand the product first.
    • it looks like a news reader with advanced content-based filtering. isn't that what facebook is? i suppose you're giving the user the control instead of lord zuck.
    • the first ... paragraph? of text is 5 lines of seemingly unrelated things with some words distractingly bolded. but what does it even mean to me? get to the point!!
    • i kinda got that it was an article page toward the end of my experience, but this doesn't really look like any article i would read. looks like a google doc with notes in it. i think you can ship a really unique article-style landing page but it needs work. good luck!

    if you'd like to review mine: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/pre-launch-website-feedback-please-4cd69b94ac

    1. 1

      Really good points. Thanks.

  2. 1

    I think there is a problem when loading your page, because when I enter I don't see anything, then if I press on the text of whatnot.ai, I get type to search, then several options appear. If I press #Facebook, I get the same blank page.

    I tried accessing via the phone but got a similar experience

    1. 1

      Created new landing page and fixed errors. Kindly ask you give me another shot, please: https://whatnot.ai

    2. 1

      @slavaGanzin sadly I guess I have a loading problem as well..

      1. 1

        Created new landing page and fixed errors. Kindly ask you give me another shot, please: https://whatnot.ai

    3. 1

      I’m also having issues accessing the website. It’s just a blank white screen for me with /whatnot.ai in the top left corner.

      1. 1

        Created new landing page and fixed errors. Kindly ask you give me another shot, please: https://whatnot.ai

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