
Avoid using landing page words like "unlock," "supercharge," or "empower."
Real people don't talk like that, and it can make your copy sound fake or insincere.
Bonus tip 🔥: Be more concrete about benefits
Question to reader: How would you improve the image's copy?
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Could you kindly share your thoughts on my landing page? I would appreciate any tips or suggestions you may have.
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It looks slick, and communicates the concept pretty well. At least I think I understand what it is.
But since it seems quite similar to many already existing tools, a section comparing it to them and explaining why it's a better alternative could be a good idea. The first question that popped into my head was "why should I use this over Trello/Notion/Jira/Slack etc..."
Great suggestion, totally agree, we are working on a new version that introduces our unique features. When we finish it, I will share the link for everyone to see if there are any improvements.
Any favourite landing pages that implement these tips?
Hey Meri,
I actually like Mailchimp's landing page, gets straight to the point: (https://mailchimp.com/en-ca)
Theres also the one I am currently working on that incorporates some of what I am learning (https://www.sackofleads.com)