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Landing Page Tips

Avoid using landing page words like "unlock," "supercharge," or "empower."

Real people don't talk like that, and it can make your copy sound fake or insincere.

Bonus tip 🔥: Be more concrete about benefits

Question to reader: How would you improve the image's copy?

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on April 2, 2023
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    Could you kindly share your thoughts on my landing page? I would appreciate any tips or suggestions you may have.
    trickle.so

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      It looks slick, and communicates the concept pretty well. At least I think I understand what it is.

      But since it seems quite similar to many already existing tools, a section comparing it to them and explaining why it's a better alternative could be a good idea. The first question that popped into my head was "why should I use this over Trello/Notion/Jira/Slack etc..."

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        Great suggestion, totally agree, we are working on a new version that introduces our unique features. When we finish it, I will share the link for everyone to see if there are any improvements.

        • Combined the organized structure of Notion with the real-time chat of Slack
        • Seamlessly integrated GPT into group conversations and task management (we will be launch this feature on Product Hunt this weekend)
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    Any favourite landing pages that implement these tips?

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      Hey Meri,
      I actually like Mailchimp's landing page, gets straight to the point: (https://mailchimp.com/en-ca)

      Theres also the one I am currently working on that incorporates some of what I am learning (https://www.sackofleads.com)