Lanterrn - New product landing page feedback
Updates:
- Background image on hero added
- Mobile font size and white space adjustments completed
Hey Indie Hackers,
I'm looking for some feedback on my new landing page:
I'm aiming for a design that captures the simple yet effective nature of the product itself. Some points to consider:
- Does the page explain the product well enough?
- Are the call to actions sufficient?
What could make the page better? I've thought about:
- More imagery (I'm a fan of the clean/minimal look right now)
- Including a code example of Lanterrn in action
- Including pricing (although I've not decided how to price the product just yet)
As a side note, if Lanterrn garners enough interest (signups), I'm planning on writing about it alongside design and development.
Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks for your time!
Good luck with the release!
On mobile (Galaxy S8) there is a lot of white space at the top but the last line of the hero text is cut off. Also the page has horizontal scroll on mobile.
I also think the contrast of the text for the features is not good enough.
Otherwise it's pretty clean and clear.
Thanks for your feedback! I’ll take a look at those issues.
I agree more imagery will improve it, or at least changing the background color. I thought some background image was failing to load in the main header.
In the second section (grey one), I'd highlight the titles, maybe just changing them to capitals or increasing the font weight.
Apart from that, I like it, pretty clean.
PS: Happy to see a lot of privacy focused products lately :)
Thanks for your feedback! I agree with your points, so will look at adding some imagery and increasing the weight of the section headers.