Launch page suggestion!
Hey Guys,
We have a ProductHunt launch next week.
What do you think of our launch page? Do you have any suggestions?
MonitUp AI Time Tracker tracks your daily activities, measures your productivity and gives you AI suggestions to improve your productivity.
Congrats on the product and wish you a good PH!
I've left some ideas to think about here - https://visualdebug.com/show/timetracking.monitup.com
Hello Stan,
Thank you for your detailed review.
Yes, we actually use OpenAI API, but people who are not very close to technology recognize it as ChatGPT, so I added the ChatGPT text in the image. We were worried that some of our audiences might not understand when we just say OpenAI. Should it just be the OpenAI logo only?
I also wrote the text in the 2nd suggestion shorter.
Yeah, I would advise you to stick with what you actually use. It can be very crucial in terms of how the data is being handled. So be transparent and honest. At least that's how approach things :)
The very first thing I notice is that the website is fairly slow. People hate slow websites and most will simply go away if the website is loading for too long.
Visually, the OTF area looks nice. But the "Unlock your full productivity potential with MonitUp" is difficult to read, because the font color is too light on the white background.
The "Data is Collection" and "Data is Processing" headlines read very awkward.
The pricing area is difficult to read because everything is too washed out, please don't use light gray font on a white background. It might look good on your screen with your eyes, but it might look absolutely horrible for other people.
Also, using gray for the Freelancer pricing tier button color implies that this tier is disabled. In UI design, a gray button typically means a disabled button.
"User / Month" in your pricing doesn't make any sense. Does that mean one user per month? If so, say that.
"PROBEST OFFER" is a very odd choice of words.
Nowhere on the website does it say what platforms your desktop app is supporting nor any other technical details, such as what languages is the desktop app available in, or how much system resources it is using.
I also cannot find the information whether this desktop app is automatically monitoring what I do with my PC, or is it a self reporting based system.
I also find it rather concerning that your product includes an app to monitor what people do with their computer, yet your website doesn't include any kind of privacy policy to let me know what you do with all the data you collect, and it doesn't also tell me who are you, exactly.
The landing page is missing a demo feature. Why not give an open access to the dashboard of your personal account? It would let me see exactly what kind of information the dashboard gives. Now, there are just some tiny screenshots which one cannot even click to view in full size.
There is also no information how long the free trial is or whether a credit card is required to start it.
I think this seems like an interesting product, but the landing page is too vague and lacking a lot of information.
Hey Jouni,
Thank you very much for your detailed review and suggestions.
I checked the site speed but it doesn't look bad. Did you have a momentary slowdown? Is it still running slow?
I typed the word "Unlock your full productivity potential with MonitUp" in bold and now it's a little more visible.
I bolded the headings 1,2, 3 and below and changed the text slightly.
I made the entire pricing field bold so it's more readable.
I made the Freelancer button color the same as the other one.
I printed the words "user / month" in a small print on the side of the prices.
PROBEST OFFER is now PREMIUM :)
I have added Windows OS to the package detail list. I added the 7 days detail to the subscribe button.
I added a description field just before the price list where I added a lot of details about the product, reports, performance and Mac OS backlog. I think this place got a little complicated, I may need to edit it a little more.
I have added many links about the product and safety in the footer.
I hope it was more descriptive and understandable. Thank you very much for your detailed review and comments. Thanks to your help, the landing page now looks much better.