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Launched landing page for Sparrow

https://getsparrow.io

Hello all,

It's been some time we created the landing page for our app - https://getsparrow.io. Have been doing a few tweaks over past few weeks.

what do you guys think?

submitted this linkon September 29, 2019
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    Hello!

    Pros:

    • Overall nice website. It takes advantage of the white space pretty well, in a way that isolates all the content assets and therefore makes for a nice scrollable experience. In other words, you're putting the right amount of words, in the right amount of space, and in an appropriate layout.
    • Niceeeeeee CTA button. It tells people what they need to know.
    • The content hierarchy is nice, too. Each section is a continuation of the previous one.
    • Nice stats on the subtitle.
    • Love the sub box in the hero.

    Cons:

    • That hero headline should not be a headline. It doesn't explain what you do and only gives out an empty detail. We know that reviews help businesses grow through word-of-mouth.
    • The stat is nice under the hero message, but why should we care about this? Because the hero does not give us any context, we just know that it's an important stat. We don't know why it is important within the context of your offerings.
    • Your image resolutions are blurry.

    Advice:

    • The headline should include your offerings - that you are kind of an automations tool for review requests. This should be substantiated with your user value proposition. Both of these things should be in your headline.
    • For the subtitle, put more info on your user value prop. Really hone in on your product's utility and then maybe include this stat.
    • Fix your images
    • The hero visual could be more actionable and prevalent to what you offer.

    Hope these help :).

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      Hey Jic,

      Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it. Lot of good pointers. Especially about the headline! I am glad that you liked the overall design of the page :)

      I am not sure why blurry images are coming up on your screen. Maybe it's because of the caching plugin I am using. I'll fix this.

      About the headline, I was also thinking the same thing. Your comment corroborates my initial thought. I am going to implement your advice!

      Thanks again for taking out time for this.

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        Of course!