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Launching Soon - Feedback Wanted

Hello IndieHackers!

I’m looking for some feedback on the landing page for my web app, SeeLink, which is launching in the next week. It would be great if you could point out aspects I could improve on, and if you could tell me how I could make the landing page to maximize conversions.

Here are a few questions for you to answer:

  1. Does the landing page tell you about what the product is?
  2. Does the landing page convince you enough to sign up for SeeLink.
  3. Is the video at the landing page informative? Is it necessary?

You can find it at https://seelink.app

on November 10, 2020
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    Yes I think the landing page says enough, and no, I wouldn't sign up. I don't see a problem with sharing links today, you just copy it into Messenger and send to somebody. And If I want to share a link to lots of people, I do it on Facebook.

    Creating a board of links... I don't usually share that many links related to a single category, so it would be either one board with many unrelated links or hundreds of board with a single link each.

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      Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it!

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    1. Yes, but... I did not get a clear view of the actual problem you are solving immediately. An emotional +ve or -ve) hook of how my life will be better with seeelink would be great.
      2 Nope, not immediately.
    2. Yes, it is informative. It clearly defined the problem and solution, but I'm not sure I would take the 2.5 minutes after just seeing the landing page.
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      Thanks for taking the time to look at it! I'm going to add a list of positives right away! Do you think positioning the video better would help?

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        I think the video is in the right place, but you need to make me really want to watch it - I must be gagging to see how your awesome solution is going to solve my pressing problem so I have to play the video.

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          Hmmm... That's some interesting food for thought. Thanks again!

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      Thanks a ton for the detailed feedback. Funnily enough, I just updated the landing page incorporating most of the changes you suggested. Thanks again for the feedback!

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    The text is hard to read because of the background image. It's too bright as well.

    1. Possibly. I find myself wondering what the use case is.
    2. Not quite, but I find myself curious to read more.

    Good luck!

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    Hi R,
    I'm gonna answer your questions:

    1. No, I don't fully understand what the product is about from the landing page
    2. No
    3. Yes/No, my personal opinion is that it's too long, text is blurry

    Some other things I'd consider:

    • The header has too many colors, it makes the text difficult to read
    • There is no branding or brand colors, I found challenging scrolling the page and finding a big red area
    • Above the fold and below the fold are very different, it looks like it belong to different websites
    • The red areas is hard to read, and makes me feel the site amatorial
    • There is no About page
    • Video could be shorter and smaller

    But I'm not an expert in landing page.

    Sorry

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      Also, the issue for the resolution of the video is with the software I used to create it. It doesn't allow you to get higher resolution unless you pay. I'll have to figure out a better alternative soon...

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      Thanks a ton for the feedback! This was feedback was definitely valid, and something I had in mind myself. Will improve upon all the points you've mentioned, thanks for taking the time to reply.