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Let me try and pitch your business in 6 words or less.

I recently responded to a post asking founders to pitch their business in 6 words or less. It took me some time to figure out mine but the exercise was fun.

My pitch. Capture, tag, search, share customer calls... probably needs some work!!!

It was a fun exercise and I would love to test out my skills on your projects. Share your website and I will give it my best shot.

Grade how I do on scale from 1 to 10

Co-Founder @ Scribbl.co

on January 31, 2020
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      Business news, 2 tweets or less

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      Community for advice on switching careers

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      On demand stock drone footage

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      (Not OP) Yours works pretty well, as is. Personally I think I'd just swap "breathtaking" for something like "awesome." "Breathtaking" is a little salesy to me. Nice site!

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        Possibly, to me it doesn't. I can totally expect to see breathtaking footage there.

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          @Zlatko <3

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        Thanks for the feedback @TimWinfree, in the new version launching next week we have actually changed "Breathtaking" for "Dynamic" since we weren't 100% happy with it either :)

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      Custom human illustrations at affordable prices

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      Low cost dev and design team

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      Software training and mentorship for students

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      Custom widgets that increase conversions

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      Chatbot creator for non developers

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      Landing page builder for mobile apps

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      Query your database with spoken commands

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        Good and thanks

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      Marketplace connecting property investors and sellers

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      Get an auto repair quote online

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      Plug and play website quizzes

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    Coincidentally this thread is only a couple degrees away from my startup's purpose:
    https://broody.io/

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      Test your one liners for free

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        Thanks! I think "one-liners" suggest it's for testing comedic language, but it's otherwise accurate and succinct. 7/10

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      Curated music delivered to your inbox

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      Create modern web apps without servers

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        Great description! 10/10 :)

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      Practical assignments for testing technical candidates

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        Perfect, thank you!

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    https://www.everbase.co/

    It would be incredible if you could come up with something better!

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      Build faster apps in less time

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      Not really in 6 words or less, but I took a look at your site and I would rephrase the headline and claim into just one headliner:

      Build apps faster, with real-time data sets & utility functions.

      Would love to see A/B test results for that 🙏

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      Tenant communications platform for condo managers

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      Was unable to view website

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        Up now, server issues earlier that are resolved.

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      Automatically track front end performance

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      Open forum to share work stories

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      Create beautiful screenshots and screen videos

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      Not OP, but this was fun. "Beautiful, sharable, web screenshots"

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      CRM for FaceBook Messenger

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      Email capture for FaceBook Groups

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      Raise money without giving up equity

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      Create PDFs with HTML

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      Proven user flow examples that convert

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        Perfect - thanks

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      Marketing best practices for internet businesses

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    http://FounderPhone.com

    We're going to change our name, but curious!

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      Receive/send text messages via slack

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    https://recast.studio

    We are planning to change the tag line. Would love to hear your perspective.

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      Video creator for non professionals

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        Thanks @urim_n_thummim
        Very close to what we are thinking. Video creation tool for marketers.
        7/10 :)

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    https://landingcopy.pantram.co

    Great thread. This is a draft, not the landing per se but would love to hear your pitch.

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      CRM/CMS for freelancers

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        I like it, thanks.

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    https://budgetpolitan.com

    Thanks. Love to hear your quick pitch.

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      Track, budget, and heal personal finances

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        Thanks. Sounds good.

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    This is my first draft of the copy, it's really not ready yet. But I think it'd be a fun challenge for you, as it's not a product yet.

    https://codernotes.io/

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      Central repository for code snippets

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      Website builder for SaaS businesses

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    Feedgrip

    Thanks for this thread, very cool idea!

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      Centralize, organize, and analyze customer feedback

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        Perfect! That's exactly what we do! Thanks!

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      I appreciate your feedback. Your point about "why should I care" is a great one.

      Here's the pitch

      Community for healing depression in tech

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        That looks good... I appreciate you sharing this.

        We plan to rework the site a little. I will post the changes once made for feedback!