Let's have a Landing Roasting Session

I think this is a good foundation! But it took me a while to understand what the product is -- the first thing I read, "Your Time Advisor will be with you soon", doesn't tell my anything about the problem or your solution to it.

It'd also be nice to have some more colorful icons or graphics to make things stand out a bit more!

I liked a lot
— animation is sick
— copy is friendly and short
— colors are great (but maybe 1 more contrast color would be nice)

Could be better
— Value proposition on the first screen could be better
— Would love to see some images / gifs and so on
— To be honest, I didn't understand the product 100% and how it's different from competitors

It's a great start. Hope this feedback helps to get more waitlist users 🔥

Thank you for the feedback! Happy to hear you liked it

100% agree with weak points — will fix it

Thanks!

Just took a look at your landing page - below is a link some feedback. I hope some of it is helpful!

Jelytics Feedback

hey there!

I liked a lot:
— "jelytics is not for you if" block
— clear value proposition and competitors differentiation

Could be better:
— design is pretty basic, I would expected something more minimalistic and premium from analytical tool
— CTA is pretty unclear (free waitlist / 30% discount / 6 month free if chat)
— no social proof or storytelling. I have some trust issues right here

hope it helps. this looks like a game-changing product

Hi Matthew - below is a link to feedback using a product I am working on. Hopefully some of this is helpful:

Pricewell Feedback

Just took a look at your site, looks like a great product! I have some feedback below on the landing page, hopefully you find some of it helpful:

Pegasus Feedback

The hero image doesn't tell me much. I'd rather see an image of what I get (see what Gravity did on their landing page).

I love the social proof but it gets confused with the tech stack images too. Do you have google as a customer, it kinda looks like it.

The landing page also seems very cluttered, try adding some space between the sections.

You could also address doubts a bit better. Mentioning "no credit card required" and "money-back guarantee" if you offer those might improve sign up for the demo.

Looking great overall!

Here are 2 improvement ideas:

• I don't fully understand the connection between your main headline ("Build and grow your product without spending a dollar") and the subheader ("Get the list of 600 products with a GREAT Freemium plan. Hand-picked by Indie Entrepreneurs for Indie Entrepreneurs") -- how would that list help me grow my product?
• The landing page could be more polished / well designed. Right now, with many default emoojis, icons, graphics it does not seem as if a designer went over it. Having e.g. avatars in the social proof section and less emojis overall might look more professional to me (but it could just be personal taste).

Hey, looking very good. Here's my thoughts (rather than doing a good/bad list, I give you my thought process as I discover it):

The above the fold is very colorful and gets my attention.

I read "Build and grow your product", and my reaction is "yes, I'm part of the audience".

"People love MakerBox, This is mutual" - quirky copy, very nice.

Then right below, with those 3 boxes, things start to be a little busier and I'm not quite sure how to scan the page, in which order I should read things. So I skip and scroll down a bit more.

And the section between "we had a startup idea" and "That's why we created MakerBox" isn't quite clear to me. I seem to understand indie entrepreneurs burn money during their journey, but I'm not fully sure that's what you mean. That leaves me a little confused, and would love a little more clarity.

'Not the “Free trial for 2 hours” type' -> yes, I feel that pain.

Then the section with the chat gets me back on track. Very nice (although could be a tad shorter maybe. took me a second or third scroll to actually read it)

but it's overall pretty good, as... I'm now reading your freemium table.

• other suggestions:
  • add thumbnails to the social proof section. It wasn't clear to me it was people quotes initially.
  • add link to the preview table in the chat section (which I realise is an image now, so it should probably become html)

oh and I submitted Polygonjs to your table, since it has a great freemium plan!

Clean layout, but other then this line "Get the list of 600 products with a GREAT Freemium plan." I had trouble understanding what I'm getting (WIIFM)...

Maybe push this part "A list of the best tools for Makers with a GENEROUS Freemium plan." a bit further up - so I instantly see what I get... And push testimonials a bit lower?

Can you make 10-15 entries free to play with Airtable? Just for tasting?

Your H1 says "The v3.0 is coming..." which might be good (a fresh approach, piques interest) and bad ("whys should I care about some v3.0?")

I like it that you promise that my PDFs will go viral (I guess everything viral should be good, right? Even after the pandemic, right?). However, I don't have the slightest idea how a "rebranded" can make my PDFs viral. It would useful to explain, with a screenshot or a video.

The benefits are good, but do you really have to put "Virus safe" as the main benefit? I mean, this is implied, no?

I like the clean look, concise copy, and brevity of this.

I'm not sure if this is a problem, but I have no idea what a "viral PDF rebrander" is. If you have any customers that might need your tool but don't know what it's called they might struggle to know whether it's right for them. Perhaps even a single subheading with a one-line summary of the job your app does might go a ways to help?

I'm also curious why I can't use V2, but can only sign up to hear about V3 soon?

hey, let's go!

I liked a lot:
— copy is overall good
— Making PDFs go viral since 2009... made me laugh, great one!

Could be better:
— no product gifs or images. I don't understand what's the product and how it works
— The value proposition is somehow weak — what problem are you solving and why should I care? this is not clear right now
— a contrast to the green color would boost the overall design

Wish you luck! It seems like a promising project

Very cool product, just wow!!! But -- you're building a visual thing, so the landing page should be stunning visually as well.

You are linking to some use cases from the footer, but this should be visible right away. I mean, explaining features is cool for 3D nerds who just need to know what they can do with their product. But displaying a few amazing results like on your Use Cases pages would also be very useful IMHO. I need to know the results that I can achieve with your product, not just the features it has.

Let's go!

I liked a lot:
— animations are great!
— design system is great

Could be better:
— footer is ugly as me in the 6 grade
— value proposition on the first screen could be better (more emotions and value for client)
— no social proof

great start. hope it helps!

Hi @Gui - here is a link to some feedback on your landing page, hopefully some of it is helpful:
Polygonjs Feedback

Can't find anything that I would improve. I'm installing it.

So be it!

I liked a lot:
— overall copy is sharp
— a lot of CTA buttons
— your assistant is great heading

Could be better:
— illustrations are a little bit off design system
— product gif is laggy
— more social proof would be nice
— newsletter is questionable secondary CTA

Hope it helps. To the moon!

oh that is interesting.

I love that

• I get what it is in 2 seconds.
• I want it :)

I would love if:

• the rest of the page was given as much as love the above the fold, as I could do with specific examples of bad situations this will avoid. And they may be there, but I felt I was facing wall of text there, when the beginning was so minimalist and efficient.

Let's go!

I liked a lot:
— design is sexy af
— copy is great

Could be better:
— first screen could be sharper (copu, problem statement, value proposition, product gif)
— I don't get how product works for 100% (maybe some How it works block)
— not sure newsletter is the best secondary CTA (maybe your Twitter?)

Great start. Hope it helps!

I just took a look at the landing page, looks like a great product! Here is a link to some feedback:
Shroud Email Feedback

Super design, quick to load, readable, I know what I'm getting.
Security question: can anyone running this read my emails? Hopefuly no - how is my email protected?

The landing page looks great on full screen (2560x resolution), but the screenshot is only partially visible for me. Depending on where you traffic comes from, it might be good to also optimize for mobile resolution etc.