Let's swap feedback

Review mine and I'll review yours!

I made changes to mine recently based on previous feedback, so here's another pass. I'm leaving out the pitch here because hopefully the landing page explains the product on its own.

Is the value proposition clear?
Were you able to grasp how the product works?
Is the pricing structure easily understandable?
Any other comments - things you'd change, points of confusion, etc...
The mobile version is still janky, working on that

Post your landing page in your reply, and I'll answer the same questions : )

bigbunny

on June 25, 2021

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Your landing page is great, I like it!

1- Yes, it is clear
2- Yes, I really like the way that you present the steps and explain the functionality (I am taking this as an example to follow).
3- Yes

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- I would include the "Assign tasks by rotation, easily." line inside the first yellow-sh section, just bellow Pickle, that one line is great!!, but I feel that it is lost as it is now.
- I feel like there should be like a little more clear separation of the sections. (background change, bigger title, etc)
I am working on https://landing.listws.com/, I still don't release this page/product, it is a WIP, thanks for any feedback that you can give.

Thank you
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  Thanks for the suggestions!
  
  Yep, I was easily able to grasp your value proposition from title text. Your product lets you build landing pages from templates super quick.
  
  I think I understand how it works; you just fill in preset fields in the template with your particular info. I'm unclear about the code editing part though. At first I thought it was a WYSIWYG, but the info about editing code and using frameworks made me unsure who this product was targeted at. An example would probably do loads of good here, which it seems like you'll do eventually with the "Edit this page" button.
  
  Pricing structure is easy to understand. Maybe clarify what "Custom code" means though. I guessing this means they have more control over what they can edit, not that you'll build them custom templates (ties into #2)
  
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  Love the "edit this page" button idea, even if it isn't working yet.
  
  I think some of the copy can be trimmed down. For example "Just select a template and fill the data, all the code is easily accessible in case that you want to customize anything." is a bit redundant, "Just select a template and fill the data, all the code can be easily modified" says the same thing with less words. Same for the section below
  
  A couple grammar/spelling mistakes
  
  Okay, the FAQ clears a lot up about #2 actually. "parameterized templates of html, css and js" made it all make sense to me, I wonder if you can include something like that closer to the beginning :)
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    Great feedback, thanks a lot! I will address all those points
    
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Hi bigbunny. Pickle sounds like a useful Slack add-on. The landing page clearly explains what it does and the pricing is extremely simple to understand. I would highlight some of the use cases that are currently at the bottom a bit higher up.

I put more detailed feedback here: https://screenbud.com/shot/113eda8a-9542-4100-a443-922095a95204

I am currently completely revamping my landing page, but will followup when it's ready :D

palmik

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  Thank you for the very detailed feedback, I appreciate it! You made good points and it looks like I have a little bit more tweaking to do.
  
  I'll make sure to review yours when its ready :)
  
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