Long time lurker, first time hacker. Could I get some landing page feedback?

Congrats on getting started! As a designer, I feel like there's a lot of work to be done - but I'll hit you with the core pieces of advice that stand out:

1/ You need to improve your spacing. I can find a lot of examples throughout your page of different divs or p/h tags that sit far too tightly against others. And at the same time, there is no consistent spacing theme throughout the page. I recommend setting up some helper CSS utilities. For example:

.normal-spacing {
    margin: 1rem 0;
}

.large-spacing {
  margin: 2rem 0;
}

And try to stick to only using 1-3 utilities.

2/ Font hierarchy. Use heavier weights more often. Some places I can see where heavier fonts are definitely needed are your green buttons (to improve legibility) and your subheadings.

3/ Break up your body with a bit of imagery. Your copy is pretty good! But there's just a bit too much of a wall of text below your hero. I recommend breaking up each of your main points with their own icon. Or turning them into [image] [text] blocks. Take a look at some other landing pages for inspiration on how this is done.

Please feel free to reach out if you want more feedback and ongoing! I'm rushing this together on my work break.

Nice work on making something.

Some feedback.

Header image is WAY too big. I don't care about a hand spinning a record, I care about your software.

Too much text. Can you boil down what you do into an image?

What is the benefit? Is it for DJs? Call that out immediately.

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On top of what others have mentioned:

1. There are some typos in the copy text, (f.ex. on "PlayItForMe is avalible" -available.

2. Using center alignment for all of the copy text is not recommended , as it is harder to read this type of layout and should be used cautiously. I would rather go with the left aligned text .

3. As already mentioned, some imagery (illustrations ,or stock photos) would increase the engagement , check some examples at - https://www.lapa.ninja/

4. Try lowering the length of the paragraph single line to around 50-60 characters for better readability.

Hope it helps and good luck with your product.

What it does: DJ puts QR code in the event, audience can request songs.

Looks interesting. Keep it going

Room for improvement: screenshots of the app could help to illustrate each point.

Hi Wesley,

Welcome to the hacking side of IH!

First of all congrats on getting to this point!

Let's get started, and these are my opinions: I am not a huge fan of your font choice for your branding.

Your CTA doesn't tell me why I should give you my info. Why should I sign up for PlayItForMe?

Your header is very compressed and squeezed together, give them some breathing room. I think your input doesn't need to be longer than 400px long.

Your paragraphs are way to wide. You could either use a flex layout or just set a max width and bring them down. The content is hard to read as is. Your text headings could also use a a heavier weight.

Keep up the good work!

I think it looks good! You should probably ditch the small lettered playitforme beta text in the top left corner. Besides that, it doesn't look bad. I can tell what it is about after reading the description. The only things I recommend you look into are a group voting system and a description section where the DJ can post rules about what restrictions are on requested songs. For example what if the person actually hiring the DJ only wants old school r&b. They should have that section to let the audience know. Hope it blows up man, could be useful.

I think there are better ways to display your paragraphs/content below the fold (e.g. Here's how it works, etc.). Moving it into rows with columns might work, or even using accordions (https://www.w3schools.com/howto/howto_js_accordion.asp, bootstrap has collapse in framework already) to add an interactive aspect to your page. Overall thinking through how to make that content more digestible should be a priority.