Looking for a Marketing Wizard
Hey Hackers,
First off hey! I'm Ash. I have built a platform for Coaches/Personal Trainers to manage their clients which offers a bespoke way todo that.
We have made some great growth and could go higher but being the Founder/CEO, Development Team, Marketing Team, Sales Team and everything else is limiting the growth of BABU.
I need someone who can help run the marketing and social media campaign for BABU. I have plenty of ideas I just cannot execute it all on my own as I am developer and not a marketer.
Our project is here: babuonline.co.uk
Can't wait to get chatting with you!
Cheers
Ash
Hi, Ash!
Your website copy is simple and breezy, which helps your potential customers make sense of it easily.
2 things I'd like to suggest to you, from a copywriter's perspective, and I hope you won't mind me saying this:
#1 - there are areas that could use more specificity
#2 - there are areas where you need to reformulate so that the reader feels like they are making choices
Specificity:
You say "boost your coaching to the next level" - this is too vague; how can you make it more specific, more tangible? Maybe you can say "Ramp up to six figures" or "get a six-month waitlist of clients" or some sort of specific result you know you can help most of your clients with.
Also, the CTA is a bit intimidating, what does it mean to "get started now"? Maybe I'm not ready to get started and I would prefer to see a "Find out more" or "Discover your options" or even "Learn More/ 100% risk-free"
Making choices:
You say "we are always providing you with the latest and best features on the market" but how about if you'd turn it into "With us, you get to pick from the latest and best features on the market - whatever you need for a competitive online presence"
Or you say "NO HIDDEN FEES. We ONLY charge the following" - how about you turn it into "KNOW WHAT YOU PAY FOR. You'll ONLY be charged for the following"
Really appreciate the feedback. Thank you!
First sentence on landing page needs apostrophe (clients'): Let us do all the difficult work, so you can change your clients lives.
Thank you! Will get that updated
Hey Ash check you mail discuss@babuonline.co.uk
I mailed you
What kind of collaboration model are you offering and what is the compensation for that?
I may be able to help getrhys.com
One simple question I have is, how did you find this need? How many potential users do you chat with to figure out what they really want?
I'm unemployed and new to indie hacker, and my biggest problem now is that I simply can't find a demand that I can do, sincerely hope for your reply
Keen to chat, what's the best way to connect?
Drop me a message on my insta: @babuonline.co.uk
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Hi Ash,
Looks like an interesting project! Shoot me an email on jh@profectify.com
I have a few ways we can make this happen...
Hey Ash! What would the compensation look like here?
Drop me a DM, happy to discuss. @babuonline.co.uk