Looking for constructive feedback on my landing page

Hey Park
your landing page is not that bad it just needs some tweaks.
for the design :
1- use a container to hold all your content in the same place the logo and menu are on the corner while your text is in the center and that's really distracting
2- the undraw illustrations are overused try to avoid them use freepik vecteezy the have a really big catalog
3- change the Membership icons with check icons and X green and red would make it look pretty nice
4- move the price on the top of the table before 'FREE' write 0$ and before 'MEMBER' write
$39.99/year
for the content :
1-Online journal meets community doesn't really clarify the purpose of the platform and how it works
2-you might wanna add more links to the menu to build more credibility contact/about
3- add social media links to build your online presence
4- the hero section isn't catchy you may change the image with a video that describes the platform
5-well done with the screenshot but that section doesn't look like its clickable it took me a while to figure that out some tweaks in the design will solve your problem and i would highly recommend removing the graphics
6- in the membership table add your CTA to join for free with small note no CC required
7- remove the section that says 'Start writing for free now, and if you want additional features, consider becoming a member at any time!' don't promote the membership too much you want to capture their email at least and you can market the membership to them later
8- i would add some interesting topics writing by the community as a section with a catchy headline and well-writing content that has a lot of interactions
9- promote your apps everywhere in the hero section and at the bottom of the page don't expect people will take time and look out for them
10- social media icons at the bottom with contact info email phone number
11- the 'Why write Journal' is really interesting you might add a section in the homepage with little description and a link to it
i hope i was helpful

--Chougrani Brahim-- Digital marketer

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I'd suggest to show the product on the top of the page. Right now you have to scroll down three sections until you can see the product and get a sense of what you are using.

Also consider de-emphasize private journals. I would think public community based journals and private journals are totally different products for different groups. By trying to be everything for everyone it's hard to have a product that stands out.

Good luck!

ThisIsGeorge

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7 years ago
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Hey Park
your landing page is not that bad it just needs some tweaks.
for the design :
1- use a container to hold all your content in the same place the logo and menu are on the corner while your text is in the center and that's really distracting
2- the undraw illustrations are overused try to avoid them use freepik vecteezy the have a really big catalog
3- change the Membership icons with check icons and X green and red would make it look pretty nice
4- move the price on the top of the table before 'FREE' write 0$ and before 'MEMBER' write
$39.99/year
for the content :
1-Online journal meets community doesn't really clarify the purpose of the platform and how it works
2-you might wanna add more links to the menu to build more credibility contact/about
3- add social media links to build your online presence
4- the hero section isn't catchy you may change the image with a video that describes the platform
5-well done with the screenshot but that section doesn't look like its clickable it took me a while to figure that out some tweaks in the design will solve your problem and i would highly recommend removing the graphics
6- in the membership table add your CTA to join for free with small note no CC required
7- remove the section that says 'Start writing for free now, and if you want additional features, consider becoming a member at any time!' don't promote the membership too much you want to capture their email at least and you can market the membership to them later
8- i would add some interesting topics writing by the community as a section with a catchy headline and well-writing content that has a lot of interactions
9- promote your apps everywhere in the hero section and at the bottom of the page don't expect people will take time and look out for them
10- social media icons at the bottom with contact info email phone number
11- the 'Why write Journal' is really interesting you might add a section in the homepage with little description and a link to it
i hope i was helpful

--Chougrani Brahim-- Digital marketer

brahimchougrani

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7 years ago
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