Looking for feedback: Etenaldi
Hi everyone! I'm FJ and I'm creating a product called Etenaldi, It is a break timer for people who spend too much time in front of the computer and struggle with breaks and back pain.
The product is still under development, but following the advice that I have read here, I decided to stop that and create a landing page.
I'm not a designer so I searched for a free template and modify it, if you what to check out the template, you can find it here.
I'm a little worried that the landing page lacks content so I'm looking for feedback and thoughts.
Thanks 👋
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Hi!
It is a desktop app, you can read it in the first paragraph "It's easy, intuitive and beautiful desktop app that encourages you to take breaks...", maybe I can put it on top.
Prototype images, good point. I created the landing page because I wanted to know if people are interested in a product like this, and I tried to make a mockup of the app but was so awful that I decided to use good looking SVG images. But you are right, if I decided to continue with the project it will be one of the first changes that I will do.
I agree statistics would make it more convincing, I will do a little more research and come up with something.
Right now I'm ok with using free templates but I bookmarked your site, maybe in the future, I can afford one.
I really appreciate that you take the time to visit my site, thank you!.