Looking for feedback on esports education tool landing page
We are building an education tool to help young competitive gamers get better at the game while also teaching them about health and the esports industry. We also add education for esport clubs and parents to help them help their little eAthletes.
Currently in building phase , we are creating relationship with our customers. We want to see if our landing page pass the message of our ambition to make well-rounded esport players and also support esport clubs and parent and also hear any other feedback you may have!
Thank you for your help and support!
Hey Loukmane, congrats on this launch!
When you write "Learn and train as a professional", do you mean that the platform is for folks that are already pro? That's what I understand, although you might want to help people become pro too?
I like that you have separate pages for the different types of audiences!
What is the main goal of these pages? Maybe you could add a "signup to newsletter" to start collecting emails of folks who are interested in Valor Esports.
Keep it up!
Hey Thibaut,
World is so small! Glad to see you here mate and you have quite an impressive funder journey! Well done.
Actually for the "Learn and train as a professional", we meant more that we bring professional training methods to players that aspire to be professionals, so our main focus is to help people become pro. We should rephrase it, may be to somethink like: "Learn and train like professionals".
Agreed, we don't have a clear call to action in our landing page. Our current reason to have it is to present the product to potential customers that we contact directly, so they can have a more detailed view of the offering before deciding to answer our emails or not. But you are right that currently direct traffic will not have any actionable item and this would be a miss! We will work on this ASAP! Great idea!
Thanks a lot for your review and looking forward to see more of your products soon!