Looking for feedback on the App Store description for a translator app

Hey there, we're working a massive update for Mate Translate's iOS app. It's not just massive, it's bigger than the app's initial version, actually. To name a few features we'll be rolling out: offline translations, the most kick-ass Safari Extension which will let you translate directly in the browser, dark mode.

Here's a new description I wrote for the App Store page:
https://www.notion.so/gikken/App-Description-Mate-v5-f23ddcba0eca468ba0bd7003c4176b50

Do you think it's straightforward enough? Could it be more concise?