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Looking for feedbacks

Hi there,

I recently launched a monitoring service for websites called Monitful (https://monitful.com). It's the first idea of a set of features that I want to delivery. Such future features are listed on the main page.

I know there're many identical services, but I believe in the set of features and not just how the service is today. So your opinion is very important, especially about the features.

Thanks for your time,
Best

on May 30, 2019
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    You're right the space is very competitive. Main thing to ask yourself is what separates you from the rest, what unique insight do you have.

    I have been through this myself, and still working out how to explain it to customers.

    Landing page wise some quick tips

    • I recommend having landing page and the app on separate domains, use Netlify for free hosting.
    • Change the navbar, have try now or get started for sign up to the right. Then have login as just test not a button.
    • For the header image change it to a picture of the UI
    • Maybe you're targeting non tech people, so might be wise to add a how it works.
    • Features I would add screenshots, the icons are nice but screenshots would be much better.
    • Remove next features, or add them to another page
    • I would add an about company/me and why you built it and your history.
    • Pricing would be nice
    • FAQ
    • Will need another call to action at the bottom
    • Finally a small footer with terms and privacy policy.

    Few quick questions,

    • Where did you find them icons :)
    • Did you look at buying templates or using a landing page builder?
    • If so why didn't you?
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      Amazing points!

      I can't wait to follow your recommendations and thank you so much for this! About the quick questions, I got icons at icons8.com and I created the website from scratch (with Skeleton css framework) just to learning more and improve my skills.

      Best!

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    Hi Rogerio,

    This is what i feel after my first look ( please excuse me as i am not a people pleaser )-

    1. There is no branding - you should have a brand image, decide colors, fonts and style of elements and keep it consistent throughout

    Once you create a brand. your product could sell upto 20x more

    1. The service and the image of the laptop( which you picked from vecteezy or free vectors site i assume) is irrelevant to what the service does.

    2. Features icon arent really good. First do the branding and then you should modify the icons8 icons to match your theme

    3. Do add more sections and content based on customers, maybe some UI screenshots

    Have a look at this for ideas- https://webframe.xyz/categories/landing

    What I like-

    The message is clear and tells me what the landing page offers.

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      Awesome!

      I'm doing a several changes to improving website based on this and @volkandkaya's points.

      Thanks for the valuable feedback!