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Looking for imporvements for my landing page

Hey all, im planning on running ads for my new projects that I have just released and would like to know how I could better optimise my landing page for conversions.

Here is the link: https://exodiafitness.com/

I look forward to hearing your suggestions!

on September 26, 2020
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    hi william! hope it's going well. here are my initial thoughts:

    • finally a website that looks like a real startup
    • im not sure what i'm signing up for by the time i reach the "start today" button. i need to know before i get to that button otherwise i'm turned off
    • so this is a tool that helps me surpass my dreams...? huh. what does the tool do, how does it help me? im not a fitbit user, so the images on the right to me seem like things that i would expect fitbit already gives me... charts and numbers....
    • is your app like "fitbit's missing goal tracker"?
    • once i scroll down i find out a bit more of what you do. "plan weekly workouts" "follow professional program" now i understand. but this text is below the fold and TINY. i would have bounced already if i found this organically (i'd give more effort if a friend sent it though)
    • 10+ premium workouts! sounds great!! tell me about those!!! i only see 4 images (with a really cool hover effect!). unfortunately when i click on it i get to a login page. really i want to see a trailer/preview or something.
    • then pricing again at the bottom... both plans are called premium. wth? just give me one option, $40 annually w/ a subtitle that says "or $4 monthly"
    • "created by william yallop" in the corner makes this seem like a personal project, not a serious business, and implies it's not getting a lot of attention. maybe move that information to an about page -- i think it's still valuable to share who you are and your story, but that small tag to me just says this isn't serious
    • the name exodia doesn't mean anything to me. reminds me of something i can't quite put my finger on. like e-trade or something idk.
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    Hi William, first of all is the product meant to start with after achieving your goals (active fitness level)? "Achieve your goals, then surpass your expectations with EXODIA Fitness." Otherwise I would change this sentence.

    I am not sure about the image of the personal trainer, because the product does work with a digital personal trainer. Typo of "EXOIDA" at google store section. I would change that sentence.

    Also I would like to see a more clear value proposition on the website. What makes your product different?

    I would appreciate if you could give some feedback in return: https://makerstack.club/