Looking for landing page feedback

https://www.visitmotion.com/

Hi all,

I'm looking for some initial feedback on https://www.visitmotion.com. I really want to start marketing this soon, but I've developed tunnel vision after looking at it for so long. Some fresh eyes/opinions would be greatly appreciated!

Does the copy explain and sell the product well enough?
Are the CTAs well placed?
General structure & design feedback

Thank you in advance :)

James

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Hi James !
I like the logo !
Some design thoughts:
- Header can have thematic photo/ illustration.
- "How does it work?" button can have more accent and some background color.
- Not sure if black is the best color for hover style.
- I would make "Visitmotion's Features" icons bigger.
- try to stylize <p> with more dark color and font-size 16px or more to improve readability.
Good Luck with your project ! :)
Romarto_Design

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  Thanks for your feedback! All valid points, and I'll definitely look to action them.
  
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Very clear! It would be great if there was a screenshot showing what the widget could potentially look like on the site

juhaelee

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  Good idea, thanks for the suggestion!
  
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Interesting idea - from what I understand, would this be like a widget present on a website, linking to other websites?

One concern companies may have is if the links point to websites with similar audience target. Veganism websites wouldn't be happy to display links to a Hamburger shop for example! Making that clear might be a good idea.

Also, I had to read your whole page to understand what/how the product works. I think you could cut Step 1 (Create an account), and simplify the copy for the following steps.

Great work!!

bamboo_inside

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  Thanks for your feedback!
  
  Interesting idea - from what I understand, would this be like a widget present on a website, linking to other websites?
  
  Yeah, relevant content would display and reward the converting website with visits from other websites on the network.
  
  Users can filter what kind of content displays on their widget, but at at them moment it’s more like “Food & Drink”, rather than “Vegan Food”. That’s definitely something I’ll be looking at in the future, but of course requires a much more diverse range of content to be submitted by publishers.
  
  One of my concerns was how digestible the content is; I’ll adjust the steps and maybe think about adding a graphic to illustrate how the system works instead.
  
  Thanks again!
  
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Looks really good.

Here are some suggestions:
your cta banner could be bigger: try 70px in your padding,
your icons down to 40px,
your text heirarchy is pretty great, however, I would think about bumping up the font weight for your h2s to be 500

makr

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  Thanks for your feedback! I’ll look to make these changes :)
  
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Looks great, love the UI.

Would suggest adding some user testimonials towards the bottom of the page if possible.

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  Thanks for your suggestion. I'll work on getting some!
  
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