Looking for landing page feedback, don't hold back

I like the idea, and there's probably a lot of potential behind it!

Here are some of the drawbacks:

1. The page looks like a feed, not a landing page
2. Everything should fit on a single screen with this much information
3. Headings and the copy font size is too big
4. What are the benefits of using the features? (I.e., What's the benefit of getting notified about the latest competitor conversations?)

On the flip side;

1. The idea is great
2. The copy is straightforward
3. Features are easy to understand

Good luck!

Hi! I like the idea very much and I'm using f5bot already. How are you going to convince me to pay you when there is an established competitor like f5bot that's completely free?

While you present the "what" pretty clearly, your page is missing the "why."

Why should the reader care? What's in it for them? That applies not just to the product your building, but to the offer as well. Why should they want to be notified when it goes live? What's the benefit?

Your closest competitor will be F5Bot.

Very simple and clear! The one thing I think you're missing is why this is useful (obviously we know this, but a potential customer might not). Speak to a few of your early sign ups about what they would do with this information, and then use their words to communicate the benefit.
Sounds really obvious but basic psych is you always want to make it super clear how your customers' lives will be easier if they use this tool - nice work!

That's pretty good! I am using a very similar colour palette

• https://unwrapped.design/

I would make your text slightly bigger on the headings and I would change the emojis for icons instead.

This way it will look more professional and more serious but overall, is fine.

Very clear and a very nice product 👌🏻

I've thought of this idea before, so I understood it as soon as I saw the page. Very clear and easy to understand.

Hey there - looks like you're on the right track! It sounds like an interesting products. Some thoughts for you:

• Your Page's top H1 heading should probably include your product name! Right now it says "Reddit keyword monitoring" - something like "Scout: Reddit Keyword Monitoring" would be more helpful. You may also want to use size/color/weight to separate the name from the description.
• It might be helpful to use images to illustrate the purpose of your product
• Your "Who are we" section has the exact same visual treatment as the list of features above. For me, this causes it to get lost in the context of everything else that's there
• The link to "Discord Bot Studio" doesn't look like a link at first blush - which means that link is really easy to miss. You're losing an opportunity to establish your authority and history of building products in this section.
• Given that you're pre-launch, it might be a good idea to add an incentive for readers to sign up for your mailing list. Maybe you can offer a generous trial period to early users? Will your email list contain tips and tricks to use the software? Hopefully something more than - "Be the first to know" - to entice people to give you access to their inbox more readily
• as others have mentioned, f5bot is a competitor... what makes your product stand out? Adding some key feature descriptions or comparisons would be super helpful here

Hey Austin, here's my 2 cents:
Most traffic on that LP will most probably come from mobile users: you might want to consider moving the form at the very bottom and make room for the first benefit section in the mobile fold.
You want to catch attention and communicate value before presenting any CTA, and the page being pretty short that shouldn't be a problem.
Last but not least, make sure subscribers give you explicit consent for being contacted by you.

Hey Austin!

I am Ben, and I have been working on Reddit content for a while with @unbundlingreddit -- I am super happy to give you my impressions after reading your landing.

The most important thing for me was that the features looked like blog post entries which bugged me a bit. I think you should work with more visual content for showcasing features (or value propositions). I elaborate a bit more with audio messages here : https://www.vero.fm/page/recM7RixfvM5JybVS/

Hope that helps,

Go Scout!

Lots of points given already, but I'd reduce the letter spacing between the purple headings a bit.

I think you should include examples.

Take a common project category on IH (something related to B2B SaaS). A social media scheduling software, for example. Then explain how your software can help those founders find "competitor conversations, and marketing opportunities". Include screenshots as well.

It is usually more difficult to create a LP with dark mode. I would recommend to start with a light mode color palette.
You can also consider using docusaurus for a LP. It lets you quickly create a LP: https://docusaurus.io

UI nitpick: fix the browser background color for viewing on mobile (from my iPhone at least) as the dark on white is a bit distracting.

Something such as this should do:

<meta name="theme-color" media="(prefers-color-scheme: light)" content="white" />
<meta name="theme-color" media="(prefers-color-scheme: dark)" content="#111827" />

Edit: in your case it seems you have the same dark background for both modes so you can just have one
<meta name="theme-color" content="#111827" />

I'll be happy to make some mock-ups of what it could look like with some love. Do you have some screenshots of your application?

For starters - repeating the same sentence under two different but sequential headings is, um, how shall I say it - a bit unexpected - perhaps you can figure out a way to get the point across without repeating it word-for-word. What I'm referring to is:

How it works
Be notified instantly when a post or comment is made containing keywords or phrases that you specify

🗣️ Know when Reddit is talking about your product, or a competitor
Be notified instantly when a post or comment is made containing keywords or phrases that you specify.

The idea is validated, there are 50 tools that do that. Mine is called syften.com. Welcome to the club :)