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Looking for some feedback on a digital poster

Hello folks,

I am designing a digital poster for my app which is currently in public beta
https://bit.ly/3HzIE7y

I am looking for some feedback :)
You can find it here https://www.dropbox.com/s/z64hrxxnchvdzrk/spaces_mkt_page_4.png?dl=0

on July 6, 2022
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    Hi Pradeep!

    I like the poster and your product, I just had a look at the Dropbox file, here are my thoughts :)

    1. Hierarchy - thinking about the way we are known to read from top left to top right, I understand that it comes quite naturally to us to have the all-important information at the top left on graphic posters like this one, so I do wonder whether flipping it and having your logo & strapline at the top may help illustrate what people are looking at with your screenshots if they're unfamiliar with your product? :)

    I also understand that size is important as part of hierarchy, and the bigger text / imagery will be seen first - so it's important to make sure that first thing they see counts! For example, can you afford to knock a few pt. off the workspace texts?

    1. Website ref. - I am a huge fan of where you use of the problem / solution section on your landing page, and I think it illustrates what you offer really well and helped me understand what you offer immediately when I first looked. Is there a way you can illustrate this same point for this poster? Showing a cluttered space (like what I'm looking at on my screen right now.. lol!) vs what happens when Spaces is in use? I feel like that would communicate it really well.

    3 - A minor one - when I used to work in graphic design, my mentor was very fickle about not using a https:// in posters, as he said it looked ugly and wasn't necessary, as searching for the domain would take you there anyway... I spotted this as it was one of those things I will never forget haha! This one is here just in case he sees it

    I hope this was helpful :D

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      Regarding pt 1 - It totally make sense, I will modify it.

      Regarding pt 2 - Wonderful idea, I might gonna make a poster before Spaces and after Spaces, hope it will make more sense.

      Regarding pt3 - One of the recurring problem I've is awareness issue ppl know about the product but can't find it on the internet so it is more of making a marketing decision over design decision :)

      Thanks you so much, it clears my mind what direction I should go ahead :)

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        You're more than welcome, Mr, and your response to part 3 makes perfect sense!

        Would love to be kept up to date on what you do. Feel free to ping me an email with your next / other desigsn to ab@roaringly.io if you wanted any more ideas :D

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          Sure, thank you :)

          Meanwhile you can checkout videos here
          Use "Spaces" as Workspaces - https://youtu.be/obVwXg0nELE
          Use "Spaces" as Launcher - https://youtu.be/kjDY0ftz9IY